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last goodbye (coppied from my journal entry)

this is my last goodbye
my last tear for you
my last memory
of what has passed
and can never be again
i wish i could remember
when you were soft and caring
but the cold hard you
keeps pushing through
taking over
any other thoughts
i own of us
the last time i saw you
your eyes were dead
souless
sad
little pricks of darkness
that almost pulled me down with you
but i have climbed out
back into the light

i never wanted to let go
i thought i could save you
i thought with enough love
i could bring you back
to the beautiful world
we once shared
but i was wrong
my love just pushed you further
from my grasp
and you took my heart
when you left

but i found it
in the rubbish
dusted it off
and shoved it back inside
all broken and bruised
its a little worse for wear
but at least its mine again

so this is my last goodbye
my last tear for you
i have new memories
to make
new dreams to live
i’m sorry your stuck in a nightmare
but i cant try and wake you up anymore
you’ll have to do that yourself

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I am a 29 year old from Australia who dabbles in writing and drawing. I have written for as long as I can remember, mostly songs as I am a singer but also diaries, random pieces of feelings – anything that comes to mind really.

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Comments

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty
    Gregory John O...about 5 years ago

    Liked it in the Journal too…..

  • :)

    – Leda D

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarabout 5 years ago

    Awesome writing!!!!!! xoxoxoxo

  • thanks :) xox

    – Leda D

  • Cassey
    Casseyabout 5 years ago

    Yay duh, here it is. LOL. Again, it’s really good writing and expression.

  • :)

    – Leda D

  • Morgan DeMuth
    Morgan DeMuthabout 5 years ago

    This is absolutely amazing. Eloquently said and very relateable. Instant fave! :)

  • oh wow thank you so much! its funny i had it as a journal entry not really sure if it was worth putting in my actual writing and people have said such nice things about it. i love RB people are beautiful!

    – Leda D

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioabout 5 years ago

    Beautiful,honest writing…………

  • thank you very much :)

    – Leda D

  • fillette
    filletteabout 5 years ago

    been there done that! Really well captured, the flow and rhythm are perfect.

  • :) thanks heaps xo

    – Leda D

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