Raging Sunshine

You are my
Raging sunshine,
I do not want to sleep
I do not want to close my eyes
I do not want to kiss my sunshine
Good-bye even for one night
Yet when I awake
I thank God for the pleasure
Of waking up to your beautiful face
You are my
Raging sunshine
You are waves of fire
I cannot come near you
Without burning
I cannot touch you
Without bursting
Like a volcano
You make me aglow
Come yonder with me
Ignite me
Until I rise
Because of the heat
Of your raging waves
My sunshine
Peaches and mangos
Will have to do for breakfast
Because I do not want to be away
For too long
Nor step into the dewy grass
Unless you will lift me up
Then we will have fun and games

© siki dlanga
9/12/2010


Ok, Anni…. i’m responding to your challenge lets see what happens :)

sunshine, morning, waking, pleasure, waves, fire, floating, yonder, volcanic, peaches, ignite, dewy, aglow, raging

Anyone else up for the challenge?

Use the same 12 words, make sure they are all included in your write

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Comments

  • Unique-Mystique
    Unique-Mystiqueover 4 years ago

    very beautiful

  • thank you Unique-Mystique

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  • AnniG
    AnniGover 4 years ago

    Ha!! “we will have fun and games”…YES, we will!
    You are great on a challenge, Miss D…super to see play along! :-)

  • thanks for the fun exercise – i thought i should come out and play

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  • uncleblack
    uncleblackover 4 years ago

    excellent, that ending is so sweet

  • thank you ;)

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  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockover 4 years ago

    the sunshine is alive in your words my sista..you are brewing diamonds.

  • congrats bro on the Support Writers title – you deserve it! one love!

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  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockover 4 years ago

    actually I borrowed from Lisa’s page..LOL

  • :) you deserve a medal or something great LOL you can wear it with pride we put it on you ;)

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  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestover 4 years ago

    This was a really wonderful creative challenge and I so love your slant on this…. It read so fluently and there was such joyfulness expressed so beautifully by you :))

  • thank you dear friend :) am delighted you enjoyed it :)

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  • markhadafairday
    markhadafairdayover 4 years ago

    awesome

  • thank you

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  • Vesna *
    Vesna *over 4 years ago

    really joful, I love it:)

  • :) great thank you

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  • Vesna *
    Vesna *over 4 years ago

    joyful that is:)

  • it was fun to do thank you

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  • jeanni2010
    jeanni2010over 4 years ago

  • glory :)

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