High October
High October belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and WMGThe tail of summer is a fire-breathing dragon dripping kernels of crimson and gold from the sky as the sun becomes a phoenix streaming past on a steady migration towards winter.
Hay dapples the fields in golden bales of moonlight while scarecrows button up their flannel shirts. The cold is coming. Summer is gone. It is the season of Autumn, when the leaves fall and the storm clouds linger.
Candied cornstalks whisper to one another of winter’s long slumber as springtime dreams are nestled away under the folds of tilled earth.
The crisp scent of apples laces its fingers through the air like a handshake of welcome while bat wings cloak the night sky and spiders retreat into pumpkin patches.
Coarse grains of stardust sift past as the trees shiver in the cooling breeze. Shedding their leafy coats. Brown paper bags left scattered and crumbling along the ground rustling with the telltale crunch of a forager working its way across the field.
Sugary rainwater gently washes away residue left behind by summer’s retreating warmth as darkness abounds, a black cat chasing after the moon.
Shimmering drops of light fall to the rhythm of popping corn while rain clouds stitched in place by fireflies blanket the landscape.
Bare branches tap in time as cool harmonies are blown through stiff cobwebs bristling in the night air.
High above the slippery elms, a lone owl sings a solo. Cheered on by the ringing applause of acorns colliding in the wind. She swoops low, her feathered belly brushing the tips of dewy grass, until she returns once again to soar on the arc of song.
oscarelizondo
This is gorgeous, it takes you in as part of the times and embraces you with the feel of the season. I love the way you set us in to the whispers of the crops talking and letting us know what is about to come, what is passing us by, and what happened before hand. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem, your talents are breathe taking, keep writing and keeping taking us into another journey. Have a great day.
Louise Kuskovski replied
Thank you Oscar, your words are very kind!
coppertrees
Great writing
Louise Kuskovski replied
thank you!
Matthew Dalton
This is an incredible piece of descriptive writing.
Candied cornstalks whisper to one another of winter’s long slumber as springtime dreams are nestled away under the folds of tilled earth.
Brilliant.
Louise Kuskovski
Thanks so much for your kind words! I wrote this one day after my son woke up and looking outside said, “Oh Mama” everything used to start with OH MAMA, “the trees are shivering.” I looked outside, he was right. They were. The fall has always been my favorite season.
namrita
Incredible picturization!
Louise Kuskovski replied
Thank you! I’m glad it gave you a visual!
Holly Ringland
oh yum, i licked my lips this was so delicious and descriptive louise. great imagery.
Louise Kuskovski replied
Thanks Holly!
Eternal-Vision
Inspired writing and thought provoking to
Louise Kuskovski replied
Glad it spoke to you!
L
Jared D White
Absolutely fantastic imagery!
Louise Kuskovski replied
thank you! I like the overtone of optimism in this piece. It was fun to write.
freechild
cool appeals to the child within and ones imagination good luck with your work
Louise Kuskovski
Thank you freechild!
Rhenastarr
Gloriously beautifully written. It paints for the reader a picture of the seasons changing guard.
Love it. The flowing beauty of the words caress the mind in gentle waves.
Louise Kuskovski replied
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words!
Louise