lonely

LordDannyl
Author: LordDannyl
Word Count: 174
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lonely

feeling lonely, thought id write a poem about it! that about sums it up really lol, as spur of the moment as all my other works, hope you like

lonely belongs to the following groups:

1620, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Love & Romance , South East UK, The Word Tree, This is England, United Kingdom and WMG

im here tonight and lonely, so whats a guy to do?
i wish i had a boy or girl who loved me through and through.
to feel a hug, a kiss, a touch, just someone to be close to
im here tonight and lonely, so tell me where are you?

i long for the days of walks in the park
of trips to the sea or a kiss in the dark
i long for the days when my love will be true
when i wont feel lonley coz ill finally have you

we can sit under a tree for hours and hours
and lie in the night looking up at the stars
we can lie in a bed and cuddle up close
and i can feel your warmth from your head to your toes.

i have the now familiar feeling in my stomach,
a feeling of fear, of want, of need
im wishing and wanting but will it come true?
can i escape the lonliness with the love ill one day feel for you?

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    What a sad beautiful poem…such heartfelt feelings….Sally xxoo

  • Alice Oates

    Alice Oates

    Lovely work, sad, but so genuine in the feelings it portrays…brilliant!

  • LordDannyl replied

    thanks alice xxx

  • Lozzle

    Lozzle

    aww, beautiful work. im sure you’ll find someone :)

  • Joaquin Loyzaga

    Joaquin Loyzaga

    fantastic work!

  • LordDannyl replied

    thanks, glad you liked it :D

  • saleire

    saleire

    You work is wonderful Dan :o)

  • LordDannyl replied

    thanks very much, glad you appreciate it

  • Tony Ryan

    Tony Ryan

    Beautiful and honest words. I can so relate. I believe that sensitive people appreciate love more deeply and as such also feel lonliness with more depth. I still believe sensitivity is a gift though and search all my emotions for deeper wisdom and clarity.The more secure I am within the more open I believe my energy is to allowing others to feel calm around me.

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