im a 17 year old boy, i go to a private school in England and have a love of theatre. i love writing but not so used to poetry, im a novice in writing and so any comments are appreciated :)
thank you lovely people XD
LordDannyl is a member of 1620, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Beginner's Expressions, Bits and Pieces , Creative Inspirations - [2pw], Experimental, Love & Romance , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Self Portrait, South East UK, The Word Tree, This is England, United Kingdom and WMG.
Him with his stunning body, his dazzling smile, / His deep blue eyes and his mesmerising voice / No more than a dream…a wish….a desire
GRRRRRRRRRRRRrrr / firstly an appology for not doing anything new or anything thats any good for a longtime, just been so busy lately and thats part of the reason im so frustrated. just feel like ever…
I want to get thin, i hate to be fat / yet day after day i get sick of that / i want him to like me, i want him to need me / yet try as i might, im not succeeding / hes hot as can be, and fit as a fi…
‘Birds flying high, you know how I feel / Sun in the sky, you know how I feel / Breeze drifting on by, you know how I feel / It’s a new dawn / It’s a new day / It’s a new life / And …
a tear runs down my face, / whilst I lie here thinking of you / of the cuddles that will never be / of the things you’ll never do the memories I hold dear, / will always live on in my heart / Iâ…
your the one that was there all through my life / parents were abroad, sister was useless / but you, you were the one that comforted me when grandpa died, i did nothing but cry / everything thing i…