Outside The Door...

loramae
Author: loramae
Word Count: 186
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Unbolt the door and open it up just a little…just enough to see through…
Peer through the crack for just a moment…hurry and decide what to do…
Should I close it back now and bolt the lock down, like it has been for so long?
Stay where I am in a still quiet place…no worries that anyone will do me wrong…
Do I want to live forever this way, alone and blue, just me, myself and I?
Dare I bring me out in the open or should I just continue to hide?
It really cannot take too many more blows, this fragile heart of mine…
It’s only just recent that it has stopped bleeding from somewhere else in time…
The only thing that bothers me and has me peering through the door…
My lonesome heart won’t stop wondering, Don’t leave me alone!, it seems to want more…
But my head says Why, don’t you remember, was it not enough pain from before…?
Still my heart is crying and pleading, if I could just step one foot outside the door…

Outside The Door...

  • Sharon Perrett

    Sharon Perrett, 11 months ago

    Wow my friend, such pain and raw emotion in these words…..... Draw strength and stand tall, you can carry on…....:)))

  • PhotogeniquE IPA

    PhotogeniquE IPA, 11 months ago

    A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. Lao-tzu, philosopher (604 BC – 531 BC).

    Beloved – take the step for you are not alone. I the Gentle Shepherd go with you.

  • Kimberley Gifford

    Kimberley Gifford, 11 months ago

    Loramae imagine all the people you could bless with your words and experiences….you have already touched my life. Show the world your gorgeous colours!!

  • John Segon-Fisher,  RPA

    John Segon-Fis..., 11 months ago

    L. This is a very moving piece. I do not know what to say other than you have people who care. “It is the tears of the earth that keep her smiles in bloom.” Stay safe!!
    John

  • loramae

    loramae, 11 months ago

    Awww…I am so touched by you sweet folks…thank you…

  • brummieboy

    brummieboy, 11 months ago

    take the step …...

  • chanel

    chanel, 11 months ago

    You express yourself so beautifully with words Loramae, all the best to you.

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