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Aeonium

hopes Allay
As light meets day
And night sheds darkness As A diseased skin
dreams Abate
in useless estate
and float into nothingness with the Abluted wind
wants Acquit
the hunger of bliss
leaving room for the shadow that is Abtruce
needs Abjured
forgetting doesn’t hurt
And the chore of breathing is simply An Acrid excuse

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its All A-okay…what do you see in this writing other then lonliness…and Im wondering if this would be a group idea???

Comments

  • budrfli
    budrflialmost 6 years ago

    awesome alligning of
    amazing alluring thoughts…
    made me run to the dictionary for aeonium!
    you might have something gere my friend :O))

  • loramae
    loramaealmost 6 years ago

    :O) If anyone would get me…I knew it would be you! I loveYa to pieces :O) Weirdo that I am… I got out my dictionary for some light reading lol and jotted the words that I don’t often see used and whallah. I really need to get a life don’t I lol

  • NeilWells
    NeilWellsalmost 6 years ago

    Well….if only something as stimulating as a dictionary produced this….there must be a well spring of poetry in you…. :)….and good poetry at that.

    “wants Acquit
    the hunger of bliss
    leaving room for the shadow that is Abtruce”

    these are three very strong lines….despite needing the dictionary… :)

  • Sorry its taken me so long to reply Neil…Thank you so much for your thoughts …I was bored lol But I still think it would be a great idea for a group…would never run out of “words” to write about :O)
    Word Scrimage" Hows that for a title?

    – loramae

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