Inspiration
The Light of Love BY Rebecca Cruz
Inspiration belongs to the following groups:
All About Your Best Work, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Prize Challenges!!, The true beauty, Two Beings Group and WMGRomeo was fortunes fool
But I bet he didn’t care,
For when he held his Juliet,
He found his fortune there.
Good fortune made a fool of him-
But for a fool, he sure was wise,
He followed true love, on a whim
And he wouldn’t compromise.
Such strength is an asset to the soul,
But Inspiration is the thing that makes us bold.
Inspiration is as sweet as the receiver-
Belief, only as strong as the believer.
So if you dare to believe, then do it with conviction…
For weakness, is the sorriest affliction.
Suzanne German
Melissa – I agree fullheartedly with you here…..safe means nothing when your spirit burns for somebody you love…sure means less when your heart questions endlessly…yes follow your heart with all your might…seemingly wrong can sometimes become right.
Melissa Park replied
Thankyou so much!
anaisnais
Strong ideas you put forward, a reminder of true loves ways!
Melissa Park replied
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Jen Whyte
’’To thine own self be true’’ etc
Melissa Park replied
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Leon Walker
I like this alot Melissa. Keep it up.
Melissa Park replied
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C.C. Arshagra
Ah, a fool for love! “Inspiration is as sweet as the receiver” I hear you!
Melissa Park replied
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Jacob Simkin
i love it
Melissa Park replied
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Lisa Jewell
Wonderful writing, Melissa.
Indeed very inspirational, and so very true…
Melissa Park replied
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simonesleeps
Nice close. This reads well, flows easily. Well done.
Melissa Park replied
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Sally Omar
Melissa…..Fantastic…..I loved it.
Melissa Park replied
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jomacdonald79
I think this is excellent. Inspiring!
Melissa Park replied
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artspace2000
wow …that was poetry at its best!
Melissa Park replied
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Dave Bradley
GREAT
Melissa Park replied
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purehart05
I love the line “so if you dare to believe, then do it with conviction…”
Melissa Park replied
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Judi Taylor
I enjoyed this very much.
Such strength is an asset to the soul,
But Inspiration is the thing that makes us bold.
Wonderful lines.
Melissa Park replied
Thankyou so much!
red addiction
Your energy put into your poem is an inspiration for others like myself to work harder on how we choose our words. “So if you dare to believe, then do it with conviction.” Powerful and intelligent! My soul feeds on stuff like this. Thank-you
Melissa Park replied
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Gregory John O...
Thankyou. A very nice piece. They deported my Juliet. noodle shop workers are a security risk.
Melissa Park replied
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Larasolnishko
So often men will tell me be realistic, live by brain, not by heart. But after reading your few lines i realise that true artist can’t live by brain, as he will lost inspiration to create immages.
Melissa Park replied
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jrock1969
love your work!
Melissa Park replied
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lovelola
Powerful truth! Love is one of the weirdest strangers in our rational world. People love to observe it from a side, but are often embarrassed to stand alongside of it.
Melissa Park replied
Thankyou so much!
Brandon Harris
This piece is amazing, and so true.
Melissa Park replied
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crusty3
true words..not easily followed..
Melissa Park replied
Thanks for looking, and leaving such a lovely comment:)
Ben Ruskin
i love this,really makes you think. very well written Melissa
Melissa Park replied
Thankyou so much!
Ellen Winchell
I thought this deserved a current “atta girl!” :>)
Melissa Park replied
Awww thankyou beautiful! nice 2 know it still gets seen occasionally:)
CoeurSansEspoir
I enjoyed reading this poem. True love is most certainly something people should follow, and it’s sad that hardly any do.
Mardra
Awesome.
Melissa Park replied
Thankyou:)