Letting Go

Melissa Park
Author: Melissa Park
Word Count: 261
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Letting Go

This was done as a collaboration with skilled photographer Artmonger – Administrator of Sarcastic Witticisms whom I would like to thank for his beautiful inspiring photograph.

Letting Go

Letting Go belongs to the following groups:

All About Your Best Work, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Prize Challenges!!, The true beauty and WMG

Sleepless under a foreign sky,

Not knowing, or really caring why -

I wandered in the morning light,

While the day was slowly waking up the night.

I saw a field, long and wide-

One lone tree grew, on the other side…

A misshapen tree, twisted and bare,

‘Twas odd to see, I had to stare..

I approached it, sunshine began too spill

gently, over the grassy hill

As I grew nearer, nearer grew the light

I stood stone still, and drew my breath with fright. ,

In it’s younger days it had been bound

With chains that were still tight around,

A revelation…I realised…

This old tree had compromised.

It struck me, like a bolt out of the blue

Suddenly, I knew what I must do.

I had blamed others, for my strife,

When it was me … wasting my own life.

I had wandered the earth and sailed the sea,

Intent on revenge, I forgot about me !

Chains were binding my own soul,

Erasing the past had been my goal…

Past scars would never disappear

These chains would always, always be here!

Around them is the only way to grow,

At last the time had come, for letting go.

that same day, I headed home,

I no longer wanted to travel alone-

I was welcomed, just like the prodigal son,

Just like that … healing had begun.

Near the gates of home there grew a tree

I Bound it with chains, as tight as could be…

So that I could watch it grow,

And always remember the power…of letting go.

  • AlexMac

    AlexMacGreeter

    brilliant work

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks beautiful:)

  • Uncle Artmonger

    Uncle Artmonger

    Perfect!!!

  • Melissa Park replied

    :) Thanks

  • kalaryder

    kalaryder

    Excellent work, feel sorry for the second tree though. I think this sums up just how difficult letting is. Well done.

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks so much!

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    Your words brought tears to my eyes….. I read them coupled with Levi’s beautiful picture, and the symbolism and power of this lesson moved me deeply. YOU have a gift indeed to bring such a message to remind us all to “let go”......

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou so much Wendy for your flattering comment:)

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Excellent work, Melissa! And a good reminder for all. What was done cannot the changed. Why add to tragedy by allowing the past to leach into the present, and thus destroy any hope for a brighter future?

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou! so glad that you like it:)

  • Katagram

    Katagram

    Melissa..you are AMAZING with your words..beautiful poem, beautiful photo..congrats to both of you..what a collaboration !!!

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou!!

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    A truly revealing piece of writing … awesome work!

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou!!

  • udonchow

    udonchow

    Thank you for such a beautiful awesome piece of writing, you had me hooked! :D

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou!!

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