Silverly

Melissa Park
Author: Melissa Park
Word Count: 287
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Silverly

My Master piece :)

Garden Ladies

Silverly belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Rain Drops and WMG

Silverly, silverly the rain patters down,
Silently, silently like the tears of a clown.
Raindrops of diamond gleam in the skies,
Softly, and sadly, like lost butterflies.
Magically, magically on the wings of a dove,
I open my heart, and send you my love.

Tenderly, tenderly, like pink champagne flowers-
I dream and imagine, gently, for hours.
Blessedly, blessedly, like a sweet midnight haze,
My rainbow flowers smile in their vase.
Dreamily, dreamily, like the blue shining sea,
The light of tomorrow, falls upon me.

Honestly, honestly, I recall tales of old,
Sweet moonlight dancers, and streets paved with gold.
Helplessly, helplessly I loose track of time,
I’m remembering the days when those stories were mine.
Eagerly, eagerly I broaden my mind
Forgetting tomorrow and what grief I might find.

Aimlessly, aimlessly, my daydream and I
We weave together, and together we’ll fly,
‘Til today is a memory and tomorrow is lost,
‘Til the sky is a teardrop and the moon turns to frost.
Prettily, prettily, the sun rises high,
Stand by, my love, ‘til evening comes nigh.

Silverly, silverly, silverly-sweet,
Like silk fairy voices and the echoes they greet.
Faithfully, faithfully, like their blue glossy eyes
The once setting sun, now begins to rise.

Quietly, quietly, the filmy light spills,
O’er the ground and the fences and hills,
Freely, freely the bounderies fall,
For my beloved daydream, reality does call,
I bypass the real and pass into forever,
Where no-one says maybe, and no-one says never.

The rainbows are spellbound,
Like the sapphire blue skies,
The emerald green grasses
And the empresses eyes.
Pure eyes of diamond
Shine over my heart…..............
My daydream and I….........’Til death do us part.

  • mychaelalchemy

    mychaelalchemy

    yes, in some ways similar, nearly thematically…I like your use of words here
    like a melody waiting to be sung….
    definitely a wishfulfilment state of mind….

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou!!

  • Joanne  Bradley

    Joanne Bradley

    Really lovely romantic poem and I agree after reading it that it sounds like the lyrics of a song!

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks so much Joanne:)

  • Honor Kyne

    Honor Kyne

    Great poem…love the flow of it :)) Great idea for a challenge!

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks so much Honor:)

  • AngelArtiste

    AngelArtiste

    This is very, very beautiful.

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks so much!

  • Donna Adamski

    Donna Adamski

    Beautiful poem…love it :)

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou!!

  • Yusufcan Koksal

    Yusufcan Koksal

    loved it and the challenge idea !! ;)

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks so so much!!

  • DoreenPhillips

    DoreenPhillips

    Lovely Poem Melissa….x…...Does the Challenge Image have to have the Text included on it….as I dont see any with text on?.....x

  • Melissa Park replied

    No it will have to be texted, but i will add the text afterwards if u would rather not do it yourself:) so glad u like my poem!

  • Angela Harburn

    Angela Harburn

    Really beautiful – the words are soft and dreamlike ! x

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks so much!!

  • amarica

    amarica

    Beautiful poem!!!

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thankyou:)

  • Sherry Osborn

    Sherry Osborn

    Very pretty poem hun!

  • Melissa Park replied

    Thanks beautiful:) luv ur new avatar:)

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