Heartfelt

Laurie McClave
Author: Laurie McClave
Word Count: 67
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Heartfelt

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Heartfelt belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and Western United States Artists and Photographers

She knew she had to find her heart
not remembering where she placed it….
maybe it was lost, or stolen……
stitch up the wound
tug, pull, tug
nice and taut
no one will be the wiser

Let not a tear be seen to escape
down thy cheek, stinging and hot….
melting and blistering pain….
dry up the rivulets
pat, blot, pat
no one will see the stain

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Oh Laurie,

    I felt this deep inside my heart….

    Sadly beautiful
    And perfect for the image.

    Lovely work, babe
    XOXOXO

  • Laurie McClave replied

    aww you don’t know how much this means to me! sweeeet ! XXOO Laurie

  • deliriousgirl

    deliriousgirl

    Ohhhhhhh sooooooooo saaaaad. I like the analogy of the burning tears on the face, very astute, dear!

  • Laurie McClave replied

    Oh not sooooo sad ! lol Thank you sooooo much though my sweet friend! xoxoxoxo L

  • IanPharesPhoto

    IanPharesPhoto

    laurie this is great writing. Its a painting in words.

  • Laurie McClave replied

    I thank you so much! :)

  • Nicolas  Hall

    Nicolas Hall

    Beautiful. . . there is so much between the lines and in the deeper parts of this work. Written and visual. . .I am an instant fan of your art!! it is AMAZING!

  • Laurie McClave replied

    Oh my! Thank you Nicolas. that is extremely humbling! :)

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blood, heart, pain and woman