Sun, clouds, grass,desert
All the animals moving
Fish in the river
Summer keeping warm
The animals frolicking
Then all goes quiet
Leaves are rustling
Stealthy Lion stalks it’s prey
The Antelope runs
Noise all around me
Animals happily play
swaying plants are glad
Rushing, rushing, swish
Banana boat on river
Rushing, rushing, splash
deliriousgirl, 4 months ago
Beautiful!!!! Smart kid!!!
Laurie McClave, 4 months ago
wonderful,thank you DG
Karin Taylor, 4 months ago
this is such uplifting poetry …. i felt so happy reading through x 3!!!!
Laurie McClave in reply to Karin Taylor’s comment, 4 months ago
Karin, leave it to the kid to do that! thanks!
Ryan J. Douglas, 4 months ago
you should certainly encourage your son to keep writing but with talent like this i’m sure you don’t have to.
Laurie McClave in reply to Ryan J. Douglas’s comment, 4 months ago
thanks you Ryan and I of course encourage him!