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The Moon.....55 word Challenge number 2
It was the moon that had awakened her that night.
High as an elephant’s eye, gleaming in the sky,
full and overflowing,
calling, calling, her name like a distant
and forlorn lover.
Silently she arose,
annoyed at the intrusion.
Would sleep ever grace her eyes again?
Fumbling in the bedside drawer,
Lisbeth gathered her wits….
The Moon.....55 word Challenge number 2 by littlestmonkey
My first effort at the 55 word challenge…at 3am, with a full moon!
I was challenged to do a 55 word piece…I wasn’t sure whether to post this in my journal or in the writing section….so here it is.
Comments
woow! I truly love this one!! ever word counted! see!!!! Instant fav!
Thank you, thank you (does a bow)….for the comments and the fave…and thanks a heap for your encouragement and gentle coaxing:))
– littlestmonkey
every line is a unique turn of words, love it.
Thank you so much Rubyjo….and thanks also for the fave…I love that you loved it:))
– littlestmonkey
beautiul write LM….TAH
Thanks Tobey…this was me at 3am! True story only the name has been changed to protect the innocent:))
– littlestmonkey