Go
To the beat of a ticking clock
And a tear in a black eye
She took him…
Beginning with his mouth
Ravishing his lips
Fucking his throat
Moving to his neck
Nibbling, biting
Sucking his fingers
One by one
She almost…...no
She licked all of him
Tasted all of him
Down…
Past his hardness
To his thighs,
Caressing, crooning
Back to his hardness…
She stroked him, gently
Sucked him, hard
Bit off his cock
Tick Tock.
written in 60seconds
Kates
Reminds me of the blood sausage scene in Love Bites ... and 60 seconds? wow!
LittleHelen
64….60 sounded better ;)
I found an old text book from school..where we had to write so many lines in 60 seconds…I think I recall they gave us a topic to write about. Not this though ;)
Leia
Hilarious, wonderfully shocking, thanks for making me smile.
Jewd
OUCH….Great work Helen…’Past his hardness to his thighs”...bit of a joyful journey there girl..
ta bella x
Lawford
Oo ah. My eyes are watering.
Jessica Tremp
haha, love it
GODD
YOU SHOULD WRITE MILLS AND BOON.
mick8585
ican relate to the 60 seconds.
funkyfacestudio
Love it !
Paul Louis Vil...
Yikes!!
You had me there Helen! Holding my breath as i read along!
Enjoying every single word and then….
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Now I sit here cross legged with squinted eyes thinking thank God i can only last 45 seconds!!!
LOL!!! hahehahehah!!!!
Nice one mate!
LittleHelen
Thanks Leia, Jewd, Lawford, Jessica, funkyface ;)
I should Curly…yes :)
Mick and Paul…45 and 60…tragic :|
Ha! ;)
ZacharyReed
nooooo
LittleHelen
Yes! Off with all cocks!
Ha!
Lys •
this is awesome, haha!
reminds me kinda of my poem, Yank
im assuming youll like it ;)
Damian
LOL, fantastic! Congrats on the ITM win!
Alice McMahon ...
Yow! Kind of like a praying mantis, from the other end. Congrats on the publishing Helen, well deserved! ~ Alice (woohoo for us!)
ozjami
actually i find this quite enjoyable,well done !!
Ange
big congrats on getting this peice published in 60 seconds helen:)
Murray Swift
Reminds me of the 1976 Japanese movie Realm of the Senses
LittleHelen
Oh interesting Murray! Thanks :)
Clark Takashima
Tell tale….owuche! Congratulations! You are a little d… Aloha CT ,good for you on the smokin’ ! I’m battlin’ it meself.
angelawillene
love it. congrats on getting published.
Duncan Waldron
So evocative & emotive; nice one … a knife’s not visceral enough.
LittleHelen
Thanks ;)
Kenny Gulley Jr.
fear in the heart of this virgin
dogfish
so wrong. :-p
Flic Manning
Very in your face and bold. I love that you dare to say things here others wouldn’t. Awesome.
KEITH R. WILL...
I’M THINKING ABOUT THIS ONE
colorblind
whoa….i’m this one…..6oseconds huh
thats whatsup
i love your writing it fuels me
lesstripperz
written with all the brilliance, authority, and pungent wit that have distinguished sex from emotion
Cassey
Sigh
JaredSouth
i lookd forward to more of your work . . .
veritasunsaid
i cant blink or look away
that….was…whoa…
whoaaaaaa
i cant get over it!!!!
congrats to you for completely blowing my mind
NurseD
and he lasted the whole 60 seconds? Sweet.
macquaid
Thanks another nightmare to add to the list.Just fooling .Great stuff.
Rakuda
I love it. looking fwd to seeing more!
blueravenice
very cool