Caught
Caught belongs to the following groups:
Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom to Shine, Midnight Ramblers and The Art of PainYou only unzipped half way
what did you expect would happen
when I crawled out of you?
of course my loose love threads
caught in your teeth
I’d give you a toothpick
but I’m not sure I’m ready to be
flicked in the bin.
Matt Penfold
Ooooo…..... love your work Lisa :-)
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you so much, Matt x
Sally Omar
Many thoughts arise from this very unique writing…Def FAV!!!! xoxoxo
Lisa Jewell replied
awww you are such a sweetie, thank you Sally xx
Jessica Tremp
spikey pointy to the soft bits is this metaphoric gem
Lisa Jewell replied
xx
ozjami
Wow ohhh waa !!:D
Lisa Jewell replied
I do so enjoy your comments :)) you always make me smile or giggle. Thanks for that, James x
Philosophy Lee
Hmm… caught in the teeth or in the zipper…
Either way it sounds like one of you’s in a pickle! :)
Lisa Jewell replied
I think we are both in a natural pickle….
Leda D
instant fave, this is awesome
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you so very kindly :))
linaji
lolololoOh Lisa.. this is it isn’t it.. and the funny thing is I will do what I must do when I do it too!! and as far as it goes.. when aimed for the bin.. it ain’t mine!
Lisa Jewell replied
a brave face
speaks of letting go
a real face
holds tightly to the end of the tug of love rope….
Until…
Thanks Lina….more than I can say…xx
Rany Lutz
This has to be an original work…...who else could do it? Great!!!
Lisa Jewell replied
hehe thanks Rany…..I’m one original gal :))
DeviousLili
Oh dear god, this is Perfect. Spellbiding to the last syllable. utterly simple and yet so deep that it hurts me.
Adore the way you write. xox
Lisa Jewell replied
Life should be simple
We make it complex…
Thanks so very much for your kind comment and care.. xxx
Leon Walker
Well I’m think’in you made the right decision!!! Great work “Lady Lisa”!!!
Lisa Jewell replied
xx
KNGodin
Wonderful analogy, Lisa…really nails the feeling home!
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you very much x
Mark Ramstead
Good God… I want a private audience with you…
Lisa Jewell replied
I feel very royal…. after reading your comment. I take it you liked this piece…x
Mark Ramstead
I like you and literally everything you do…
Lisa Jewell replied
You’ve not seen everything I do ;) hehe
erika15
wow....I have nothing else to say. xx
Lisa Jewell replied
Wow is good enough for me :)) thanks Erika xx
ArcadiaTempest
God your mind is a maze of themes and ideas that totally surprise me and take me to a new place….I am getting addicted to your writing…what a delicious addiction!! XXXXXX
Lisa Jewell replied
I do believe you’re right my mind is a maze…...I often forget to drop breadcrumbs whilst walking through it….LOL thanks so my babe for your constant encouragement xxx
ArcadiaTempest
It just hit me….you have in these few lines captured the movie Kill Bill for me. It was directed by Quentin Tarantino and starred Uma Thurman. I don’t know if you know this but Uma was a kick arse woman who sure wasnt ready to be flicked in the bin!!!
Lisa Jewell replied
Oh I know the Kill Bill series very well…..Lordy I’d like to be Uma Thurman in more ways than one..
this is an awesome compliment…..I can’t thank you enough xxx
Michael Scholl
Talking to your pants again?
Lisa Jewell replied
LOL well no real pants were used in the making of this piece….only a heart.;)
MyheART
wow…you are a brilliant writer…this is awesome:)
Lisa Jewell replied
So are you Robin…..thank you kindly xxx
Mark Ramstead
True enough, however, my imagination serves me well in this case… If I had to choose one word to describe you, it would be delightful.
Lisa Jewell replied
You’re the perpetual charmer…;)
Mark Ramstead
Not in person, or in private, but in public… you are right.
Lisa Jewell replied
Behind every monitor lives and breathes insecurity….?
Del Millar
A brilliant way of speaking parting agony. Exactly how it feels,
having been in the skin of a soul mate and ripped away,
a limb comes off too.
Further down the track, not wanting to let go….
heartfelt, gutfelt, corefelt, oxo
Lisa Jewell replied
Your understanding is comforting….but how I wish you did not understand based on personal experience.. xxx
bellmusker
I like this indeed…...it packs a real punch and leaves me with my head on an angle, smiling at your imagery and imagination. Love it. x x
Lisa Jewell replied
My back straightens and I feel warmth in my cheeks when you comment on my work…
Thank you My Dearest xxx
Mark Ramstead
Well yeah…
PJ Ryan
my loose love threads
caught in your teeth
stunning x
Lisa Jewell replied
xx
TheWanderingBoo
awesome writing
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you….x