The Mind

Jeeeeezus…those last four lines are priceless….
“In-between death and the boat
sailing out of Hades”
You should write the next album for Panic At The Disco methinks…and that is a HUGE compliment from me because I think they write the best fucking shit since John Lennon!!

Lessons….yes.

I really love this…so clever.

Your mind is far beyond mine…should we learn from the lessons or just say fuckit…and put them down to a screwed up moment in time…made me think though Lisa…thats NOT good for an old tosser…xoxox

Forgive the tosser…he did not mention the wonderful write as well in he comment…...may my sins be forgiven, and on hand and knee he douth beg…:)))

SGG is a forgiving mind and soul

lol minx…she will be forgiving next week when the wrath of ajay haunts her…:)))

forgot to mention that i adore this poem. its fan fucking tastic. love the imagery

..it runs almost like a riddle in my mind; the way the words flow, the way it makes me think…
Such good writing Lisa – thanks x

Love it Diva. Always thought provoking! Lessons… hmmm… had plenty of those. xx

damm that’s good..

wow!!!!

Lessons are what I seem to get from all of your works!

the x-box in that last comment was made by putting an exclamation point before and after the word sensational…(don’t know why it comes up) anyway, now you know ; )

Cleverly written ….

i’m loving it!
a series, wow.
i told ya you had smarts! ;-) xox

Lisa friend – again, this is my favorite style of writing anyway and… you just nail it!!!!!! It’s hard to say allot in 32 words – you spoke volumes!!! I am so happy and proud that you write.

Rog

Thinking what I have in muslin layers, dont want to be between, when the time comes; I will be on it.
You are truly magnaminous. and your writing is a elixer!

By the way, I read your last first and so on.

the lessons…sigh
i love these three pieces. they go wonderfully together

Good short piece and straight to the point I love this one,You should try and write some song’s like Kristy said I don’t know about panic at the disco though god.

I don’t drink anymore….but if I did, I’d love to have one with you just to have a toast! This is good stuff…...add this to the favorites list!

THIS ONE.. well just tickles me gray matter.. I like the wrapping in muslin.. kind of see the matter oozing out between the cotton holes.. but more than that Lisa .. Our sweet little minds do tend to carry such loads.. from hell and back again ..Perfection all the way! XXXo

When I think of you
I find
A muse that stirs me
To my soul
And what attracts me
Is your mind
A mind that makes
A like mind whole :-)

x

Sanity is not a prerequisite for a lovable mind ;-)