Mind's Lot

LisaG
Author: LisaG
Word Count: 100
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I found myself in the rainforest of my mind
surrounded by breathless green

There is no hint of loneliness
inside my mind

There I befriend creatures
of both sorts

The ascetically lovely
The hideously ugly

Upon earths spread
we feast on
lascivious laughter

Singing raucously
dripping our saliva

Nourishing with our
Oddities

Sweating monsoons
for all the above
and below

Creating
a rejuvenating
mudpack

of eternal
~~ you and I
shall be alright.

At least in my mind
a creation
all of its own

That dances with goblins
And delicate fairies

Bowing to the
Gracious earth

That allows our lot.

Mind's Lot

  • Philosophy Lee

    Philosophy Lee, 2 months ago

    “in the rainforest of my mind”

    This sounds like a good title too.
    Very good composition :)

  • LisaG

    LisaG in reply to Philosophy Lee’s comment, 2 months ago

    Thanks PL…...

    I’m glad you like, as it comes from my very hearts desire via my mind hehe….

  • AmandaWitt

    AmandaWitt, 2 months ago

    I too like the opening line – amazing how things like that can be described.

  • ozjami

    ozjami, 2 months ago

    this is very cool,a very surreal fairytail Lisa,well done !!

  • Roger Sampson

    Roger Sampson, 2 months ago

    The lushness of your mind Lisa – never are you alone!! This is a very interesting writing, being comfortable with what your mind entertains. Ahhhh… entertain that which is good for Lisa, she knows deep what it is!!

    Rog – wink!

  • mick8585

    mick8585, 2 months ago

    These magical words offer a ‘vastness’ of mind that draws everything to them.
    Beautiful phrasing and content. Nice one Lisa

  • iofthebeholder

    iofthebeholder, 2 months ago

    this is gorgeous

    i love it

  • LisaG

    LisaG, 2 months ago

    Thanks, Amanda, James, Rog, Mick and Iofthebeholder XOXO

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, 2 months ago

    So, I logged in specifically to fav this because it is a masterpiece and speaks to my heart, just like my Lisalove does with every word spoken and unspoken.

    MWWWAH

    xox

  • LisaG

    LisaG in reply to Kristy Lee’s comment, 2 months ago

    You’re so special, Kristylove…...I can’t wait to see you….more than ever XO

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 2 months ago

    what a fertile place…..to grow and nurture…

    suzanne x

  • LisaG

    LisaG in reply to Suzanne German’s comment, 2 months ago

    hehe I think so too…..of course their is a lot of manure in my mind too…

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 2 months ago

    gotta love that sense of humour lisa :))) !!!

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