The Day My Heart Froze

LisaG
Author: LisaG
Word Count: 241
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Perhaps, I was sixteen or seventeen when my heart first went cold and my resolution stoic. It was the year my first child was born and my life changed; irrevocably. The sense of estrangement from my previous life was palpable and the loneliness was directed onto A4 paper in biro ink.

Every spare moment of the day, I wrote about everything; the loss of friendship, love, my aspirations, the joy of my daughter, the pain of not fitting in.
The comfort I sought and found in writing and reading my own writing; kept me sane, kept me company, kept me happy.

Dinner was always on the table, the sheets washed, the house cleaned with a certain Mr Sheen. He wanted for nothing.

But he took everything.

The day he read my writing out loud, laden with sarcasm and a vicious anger. I sobbed my heart out and begged him to stop; as he tore each one into tiny paper ribbons.

I made a solemn promise, as I slipped my blank paper and pen into a will-box; from this day forward, I shall never write again.

Twenty years and some passed and my word was kept true. But many changes had occurred. I’d moved on from him and found in another, acceptance, encouragement, a will of giving liberation. The thawing of my cold heart.

So I returned to my love, my solace, my company, my writing.

And I am happy again.

The Day My Heart Froze

For The Like A Virgin comp

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  • Julie Langford

    Julie LangfordGreeter, 2 months ago

    Oh Lisa, how beautiful, yet tragic and powerful writing. Two words for you girl – Keep Writing!

  • ENaLu

    ENaLu, 2 months ago

    I’m glad :)

  • mstrace

    mstrace, 2 months ago

    completely authentic…beautiful. And SO glad you eventually returned so we can all read your words!

  • Nicole Ryan

    Nicole Ryan, 2 months ago

    you’re so beautiful … i love this .. and it resonates for me so strongly too xx

  • Yasemin Sumner

    Yasemin Sumner, 2 months ago

    oh, it nearly made me cry when I read those words, I shall never write again even though I know this one had a happy ending, it made my heart wring.

    your words are so beautiful and this resonates with me too…

  • natapee

    natapee, 2 months ago

    i’m glad this has a happy ending and you reclaimed your voice.

  • Erin Lyall

    Erin Lyall, 2 months ago

    This is beautiful, Lisa.. So awful but so wonderful at the end… I absolutely love it.

  • ozjami

    ozjami, 2 months ago

    Powerful and elightment my dear friend ! :)

  • aglaia b

    aglaia b, 2 months ago

    true heartache portrayed so well! ;-) xox

  • Saskia Greta Sansom

    Saskia Greta S..., 2 months ago

    This is so beautiful, and so inspiring. x

  • Symmetry44

    Symmetry44, 2 months ago

    No one can ever tear what’s in your heart up Lisa. Thank God you chose to write again because to not would be to deny the world your wisdom, intelligence and loving heart.
    This piece choked me up big time girlfriend…..

  • careless rapture

    careless rapture, 2 months ago

    i am so happy for that…this place is a better place for having you as company
    x

  • markgb

    markgb, 2 months ago

    I love this.
    Amazing piece.
    Beautiful.

  • bellmusker

    bellmusker, about 1 month ago

    So I returned to my love, my solace, my company, my writing.

    And I know your muse was waiting with open arms…..I’m so, so happy you let the ink flow again. x

  • mick8585

    mick8585, about 1 month ago

    Isnt it funny how we deny ourselves for others, even if they hurt us deeply.
    I dont do this any more.
    Nor should you.

  • Matthew Mitchell

    Matthew Mitchell, about 1 month ago

    well done.

  • LisaG

    LisaG, about 1 month ago

    Thank you XOXOXO each and everyone; gods you are all just so beautiful. XOXOXOX

  • Christina Martin

    Christina Martin, about 1 month ago

    xoxo :)

  • Kristy Lee

    Kristy Lee, about 1 month ago

    Breaks my heart…but fills my heart with love too. I absolutely love you xox

  • mariemadeleyne

    mariemadeleyne, about 1 month ago

    no words….... too moving
    Ciao Lisa.
    Take care lovely lady

  • Roger Sampson

    Roger Sampson, about 1 month ago

    Moved. Pained. Cried. Related. Read…. your words…. your writing…. from your pen…. on your paper…. from your heart…....... rejoiced.

    Rog

  • Outdoors2

    Outdoors2, about 1 month ago

    Good for you to find Your_Self_ Lisa
    External negativity, I’m sure, muffles many unknown talents

  • Miri

    Miri, about 1 month ago

    goodness, i felt that like it was a physical blow which in a way i suppose it was
    i’m sooo glad you wrote again, lovely piece

  • Mel Brackstone

    Mel Brackstone, about 1 month ago

    We’re all happy that you’re writing again!

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