Dangling Line
her
voice
is
steady
and
controlled
coming
down
the
lifeline
my
heart
reads
an
epic
into
each
word
she
cautiously
speaks
her
broken
heart
sails
storms
to
a
beach
line
riddled
with
the
flotsam
of
my
own
wreck
will
I
find
all
my
pieces
in
time
to
love
her
back
into
place
Sally Omar
I love this!!!! I read it very slowly & def a Fav…!!!!!!!!!!
Lisa Jewell replied
Slow and steady….tis not boring it is savouring. Thank you so much, Sally x
JenniferB
Brilliant! I love it when thoughts kind of fall and flow naturally like a stream of clear water. :-)
Lisa Jewell replied
Oh it makes everything so much easier when they do. Thanks Gorgeous x
DeviousLili
Aww. I adore this style so much. Great writing, lovely Lisa. xox
Lisa Jewell replied
Thanks babe,
this is certainly a style you either like or hate…glad you like xo
ArcadiaTempest
Line writing with your impeccable way of sculpting words that teardrop down…. Just brilliant! XXX
Lisa Jewell replied
awww thanks so much….
I’ve come to the conclusion one never can tell when one is going to affect another….xxx
PJ Ryan
that’s the most beautiful fishing line i’ve ever seen x
Lisa Jewell replied
xxx
Holly Ringland
darling, why is this stunning piece of art in your journal and not your writing portfolio? i read each word aloud, each line dropping into the dark depths where all secret thoughts and yearnings and ponderings hide. exquisite stuff, honey.
Lisa Jewell replied
Well….said in my best Samantha Stevens voice….
This piece was effortless and did not take long to write….which I considered meant it belongs in my journal….might have to rethink that idea in future. xx
Matt Penfold
I’m hooked Lisa, you could catch much on a line as strong and well crafted as that :-)
Lisa Jewell replied
hehe I’m smiling :)) that is a good thing x
Paul Louis Vil...
In a journals darls?
Doesn’t lesson it’s impact and beauty! :D
Lisa Jewell replied
I hope it warrants and extra hug hehe ;) thanks PLV x
natapee
I agree with Holly and Paul, this is beautiful. I think the things that are written most effortlessly just means that they’ve come straight from the heart, and our head hasn’t had time to edit it too much. x
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you so much Nat…..how lovely your are…xx
linaji
Boy.. you better put this in the right spot.. I will save my voice..witch is itching to sing your praises and my FAV BUTTON.. when you get this glorious piece in THE WRITTEN TEXT!!
silly bee.. I hope all your next ones come so effortless that you just let that damn break and go to the next level of joy in your work!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxoxo
Lisa Jewell replied
hehe you are a darling…
I’ve decided to leave this here. A Dear Journal Entry….
The song I was listening to when I read your comment here
Thank you for your kindness
xoxoxox
Charles Kohnen
Wow! Always amazes me going through the redbubble finding diamonds – great final words! great work!
Lisa Jewell replied
What a lovely thing to say, thank you kindly Charles :)
linaji
Thanks so much.. I love this as I lay me down to sleep.. xoxox
Lisa Jewell replied
Dream sweetly xxx
oneperfectkiss
ah, love you so much Lisa….but who couldn’t love you? this is so honest and heartfelt and the way you wrote it, the style, really makes it hit home…. xxxx
Lisa Jewell replied
awwwwwwwwwwww you are beauty xxx thank you always. xxx
Shoaib .
beautiful
guess
we
have
a
lot
in
common
after
all
is
said
and
done
whats
done
is
said
Lisa Jewell replied
you
make
me
feel
wonderful
and
less
alone
x
x
x
MyheART
a awesome and creative piece…’will I find all my pieces in time to love her back in place’...wow..love it:)
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you so much Robin xx
Del Millar
A lovely piece Lisa, can feel this.
Fragments sort of find places to
reside in shock – places that are
far removed from
any other known place;
embrace your self with much love – you are
very real
very significant
very loved
and one day all
will be well
all is well
oxoxoxoxoxoxox
Lisa Jewell replied
I am trying….
I feel it is important to recognise that we are all in the same sea….some of us are a little more damaged then others…
As is my tendency, I find myself looking to help others even though I am broken…
xoxoxo
Tracey Mac
Such a divine list of magical words, all strung together like a diamond necklace dripping from your fingers….....
I loved it…......
xxx
Lisa Jewell replied
What a lovely visual you’ve given me…...thank you so much My Darling xxx
Rhenastarr
A line graced with beautiful words.
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you kindly :) x
limerick
This is simply beautiful. articulate. breathtaking.
Lisa Jewell replied
How lovely of you to say so…thank you :)
JonoCarrick
Such a wonderful flowing mind you possess Ms. G.
Again I felt as if I was swimming in the pool of your subconscious.
Lisa Jewell replied
I promise..I’ll not let you drown…..X
thanks Jono X
devotee1
Brilliantly complex! Love for someone else…love for one’s self perhaps misplaced in a great journey seeking to know all love. Great writing!
Lisa Jewell replied
I adore your interpretation…..Thank you so kindly, Joe xx
Erika .
Oh Lisa…this is so beautiful. It’s magical. You are sublime. xx
Lisa Jewell replied
Oh shhhhhhhhhhsh hehe….we are all just dog paddling through life…
thanks Gorgeous Erika…xx
Rachael Hope
beautiful! just like you!! lovely words xx
Lisa Jewell replied
awwwwwww I’m going to get a big head…hehe….
thanks Rachael xx
gretchen .
gorgeously soft. ‘love her back into place’. ... enough said. xox
Lisa Jewell replied
Thanks babe xx
skinnyman
beautiful LIsa:)
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you x
Shanina Conway
....amazing Lisa…and you are;)
Lisa Jewell replied
Nah just a simple gal x
jacqleen
I loved this…....................simply yet complex…...and it just flows sooo easily!!! very nice piece of writing…
now why is this in your journal??? :) xx
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you so much, you beautiful woman….
when I wrote this it was a quick succession of feeling, it took me very little time and for some reason I did not think it worthy of my writing section…
Now I like to think of it as a Dear Journal entry :)))
Cassey
Word art for sure. Your talent for expressing yourself and making it all so palatable is astounding.
Lisa Jewell replied
Oh you’re so kind to me….thank you Cassey…x
deliriousgirl
oh, fuckaduck!
You’ve floored me once again, my girly-girl.
Lisa Jewell replied
hehe here I was thinking I only used the fuckaduck saying ;)
Thanks DG more than I can say xxx
aglaia b
i love this kinda stuff.
you are so good to bring it back in fashion lisa g. ;-) xox
Lisa Jewell replied
thanks Gorgeous….
I’m such a retro girl :)
MarkezzAckui ...
how creative your spirit is! there’s depth beyond belief in this. I will read this one again and again….(as I already have) and grasp more and more meaning. This is great Lisa. You’re one of a kind.
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you so much Markezz…...I feel the same way about you xx
msdebbie
I really adore that I came to this gorgeous line from Shoaib’s Abyss
Wonderful stuff – would also advocate it being in your writing section over journal.
Such intensity and depth in these wonderful words
Love and laughter
xoxo Deb xoxo
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you Deb,
I really appreciate your thoughts :))) I’m so glad you enjoyed this one xxx
ambient-1
Amazing piece of writing Lisa! Love it!
Lisa Jewell replied
Thank you Robert x