BROKEN HEAD

Lisadee
Author: Lisadee
Word Count: 110
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I felt the pressure building inside my head,
Like a balloon too full of air, threatening to burst.

I’ll just keep going…it’ll pass.

The vein burst; shattering the right side of her scull spewing innards and bubbling scarlet froth, burying her head into the nearest pillow she releases the sobs, body collapsing in a useless wallow. So intense is this pain she wails in hope of relief. There is no escape.

The hole in her head still open, raw and damaged.

The wails are no longer heard just the thud thud thud deep in her chest, sitting up she remembers to breathe.

Dizzy and hurt.

The day goes on.

BROKEN HEAD

Its not entirely perfect i know that.

  • Firedrake

    Firedrake, 6 months ago

    x

  • flower68

    flower68, 6 months ago

    If she can muster up the strength to look forward she will see,no matter how distant into the future,that there will be sunny days,laughter and peace again.And even if the vision is just a pinhole,it’s something to reach out to when everything has fallen away, and eventually she will hold it firmly in her hands.

  • LostBoy1

    LostBoy1, 6 months ago

    Keep pushing through Angel :)

  • ozjami

    ozjami, 6 months ago

    owwwww !!

  • micmac

    micmac, 6 months ago

    Another one ,I wish I could do something for you ,those words sure are right on the spot for a huge one,even more terrible when you’ve been hurt…take care …Gigi

  • Deborah Parkin

    Deborah Parkin, 6 months ago

    I remember seeing an interview with Bob Geldof and he said that when Paula Yates left him for Michael Hutchence he felt his heart physically break the pain was so bad – this is what your writing makes me think of – this is you mind – which controls your emotion, your pain as much as your heart and it feels broken – i wish i could fly through cyberspace and rescue it – i am thinking of you – can’t find the words to help you but i hope your own words and work is helping somewhat.

  • nofrillsart

    nofrillsart, 4 months ago

    oh this sounds a little too close to home right now. I got a Broken head too! Breathing really is so important hey! :)

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