your caring

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Author: linaji
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your caring

Loving gestures are wonderful
sometimes depending on the day they switch on a feeling
not good nor bad really
however something that gets attention more than the purpose
of the gesture
tis our own agenda of course that dominates everything
that is why I find it hard to believe we could influence a fly
cept in death
but even then the choice seems to be
fight or allow
I like to think if I faced a death and I could choose how
I would respond
I would choose the allowing
and maybe I could stay conscious through the transition
from life to life
anyway I love others
I love me
gestures are are welcome
from you to me.

you sent me a movie of your caring

I watched you click on
view seems stunted but the feeling is mutual
words from a great poet you sang
pearls to swine

and

Divine
Otherworld Lovemaking

ok for me and Soul to Soul
but enough?

Sure,

Until fingertips tenderly touch wanton waist
and the lips unleash pheromones from the devils dice
Until the finesse of fingers caress the half moon of centered landscape
Foreign movie subtitles direct

I watched you soothing my loneliness on waves of ocean bites
but I was not lonely

Until,

you clicked off

Linaji 2009

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    This is a bomb diggity of a write..translation: incredible totally mind blowwing piece that took me into a wave of feel good as I read..love the whole idea of switching on and off and the opening was done well…kickass read:excellent.

  • linaji replied

    Oh darling Chris.. you really have me smiling.. I am enjoying these past few days and I feel so good!!

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    great . tom

  • linaji replied

    thanks Tom! x

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen

    wowwwwwwwwwww….THIS IS sooooooooo HOT…..I loveeeeeeeeed how it MOVED from where it started to how it ended…...and YES, those GESTURES….hmmmm….they LEAD to different things, all pending on what gets turned on or off :)) AMAZING READ…...! instant LOVE for me :)

  • linaji replied

    I so love it when you appear.. I’ve much catching up to do but I will say your vibe is precious here. xxx

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    click on….................

  • linaji replied

    Just like that camera your in KJ!

  • lianne

    lianne

    Lina I’m just about speechless given the grace with which you put this together and your description is poetry too. How could we not love them both and you who created them. I just love the click on – click off and that ending – no way it could be better than that! Brilliant work.

  • linaji replied

    Oh Lianne, I am so so pleased you like this one. I feel like when I dream like I did last night I seem to feel so much the next day and I hardly hardly ever ever dream. (well remember them)
    I am tickled ,,,you gotta know this, as I am smiling and now.. upon your lovely comment am out the door for the day/night! thank you darling friend.

  • Linda Ridpath

    Linda Ridpath

    such skilfull writing linaji, you get better and better!!!! xxxx

  • linaji replied

    Big HUG…NO.. hugs xoxox I truly like this comment!!

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Oh how true is this…..

    gods my darling heart, what a sublime piece,
    could we be looking for a feeling
    more than we are really looking for a person?
    are we that selfish?
    OMG my head is in a spin..

    I love you xoxox

  • linaji replied

    Oh my Love here you are.. right before bed… I have been out and driving all day and I have been to class.. but now I am here with you… like a heavens breath you feel like I would always like to feel when I come upon ‘person’... I feel a deep connection with you and one that will not die out by numbers nor any one else. Solid and yes a feeling that lucky for me has a string attached to it and at the end of that string there is a woman and that woman is talent and posesses a smile I adore with arms loving back.. xxxx

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    Excellent, Linaji!

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    oh boy…you’ve GOT to love them pharomones! wow. um..yeah. bring it. love it. :) lol xoxox

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    Foreign movie, only another lonely moviemaker
    no subtitle required
    but all the great motions of prayer were present like Rumi says of prayer…
    hatch out your hopelessness
    the movie says here I am
    the subtitle goes on afterward
    in kind yellow
    strokes.

    I cried last night
    it may be illusion that we are separated from God
    why does the illusion feel like the unnoticed subtitle most times
    but at some moments like
    the full wide-screen high definition treatment; three hours condensed
    to five minutes of tears and white pain?
    I don’t know. I am un-enlightened, and
    too sober for my own good.

    But still, maybe, though this illusion we know in our head
    because we’ve read
    some rainbow text and consoled our mind with minty psalms
    still this feeling persists about Home
    each letter H O M E
    like an urgent colour, libidinous with longing for its
    other three companions. Why does home have 4 letters?
    1. I am
    2. I wish I had….
    3. I really believe I have….
    4. I’m too drunk to know if I have but I don’t give a fuck! hahah

    Maybe the 4 walls, H O M E
    are projection screens
    the movie – the same one plays: “Separation”
    and we gush and scream and pee our pants
    and just every now and again we crook our stiff neck and go peripheral…
    the heart-blood, warm, sweetens into its shape because it sees

    a crowded theatre.

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    damn I’m gonna post that one…

  • linaji replied

    Holy crap U Betta! I was driving and had to pull over.. My heart was racing and smiles of such deep recognition swept over me .. I have missed a muse in flesh

  • rodeorose

    rodeorose

    Love the way you roll that film in your mind Linaji…and these responses are so amazing!!!

  • linaji replied

    Hi Rosie.. teehee.. thanks so much.. I am blown away lately about so much.. I have a time regaining my footing as I am being pulled in a direction I am not familiar with..xxx

  • ellamental

    ellamental

    another winner!!!

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    lol, well you’re an Ace at Attraction. We non-fleshers can help you get a better idea of what you want to manifest. One thats clear as clear, just full throttle the Linaji machine and expect it. LOL
    happy driving

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Amazing!! :)

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    wonderful writing

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    In the end, it is all great—to have been privileged to feel, to love—if not entirely the person then the moment and life—in love with Love. Wonderful writing, Lina! As always you have this marvelous gift of bringing the writer to your time and place, and allowing them to experience what they themselves are trying to get at but just need the extra push that only the passion of a great poet, as yourself, can vividly manifest. xox

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Brilliant…Absolutely Brilliant!!!!!!! xooxxoxo

  • Vasile Stan

    Vasile Stan

    Nothing more to say ...this is my fortune dedicated to you, dear Lj

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