Open Door

linaji
Author: linaji
Word Count: 113
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Open Door

On the run today.. xxx

Peace in my footstep,
closer to your door I break to run
ahhh it is open and the room
smells like Rosemary and lemons
music…
it that my own singing?
your hand grabs my bliss
tender kiss
what is this?

(A rose is placed in my hand it is soft white with pink tips)

Flower wisps scent my smile,
and for awhile,
we dance to the hum of our joy and collapse
on a rug made of passion
oddly fashioned
to do with as we please
it’s not even noon
the door still open!
raindrops for meters sake
Break fast is hearty, we partake

I
bite
in

and feel satisfied.

Linaji 2009

  • kenspics

    kenspics

    Wow… passionate and filled with joy!!!!
    Wonderful writing!!!!

  • erich biemer

    erich biemer

    your work continues to expand the meaning of joy…
    namaste

  • navybrat

    navybrat

    a fiery resonating rhythmic cadence….

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    Always on the run … you go girl!

  • carlotta peacock

    carlotta peacock

    I am with navy on this, cadence in a slow and measured form xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Marvelous!! :)

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Delicious…
    you exude a scent I crave.

    xxxx

  • marieangel

    marieangel

    as beautiful as a gisselle on the runx

  • rodeorose

    rodeorose

    This piece just dances Linaji! Love it so much :)

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    This is just yummy good writing my friend.

  • Danica Radman - Tazzina

    Danica Radman ...

    wondeful!!! I’am back, and i will write now, you make me feel the urge
    :) love, tazz

  • Jack Grace

    Jack Grace

    On the run today, how nice to come home to an open door. Seeing you full of energy, passion, focus and creativity, go rock the world!

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    yummalicious lusty lina… and so satisfying

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    wow…breakfast with a mmmmmmm :¬) wonderful writing…

  • Anna Shaw

    Anna Shaw

    Wonderful writing. I can taste the words.
    xx

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Wow I love this to bits very passionate …....... great design of words …......... what a great thing to experience too! – hugz – David

  • Cherubtree

    Cherubtree

    Lovely Lina..:-)

  • bloorain

    bloorain

    passionate indeed, well written!

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    oh! such a joyful beautiful song! warming to read this. thank you!

  • JaneSolomon

    JaneSolomon

    Yum Lina. xxx

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    yum !!! beautiful words darling !

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    Hello Linaji… I love the rug made of passion, not smelling of goatskin or rosemary, just wow… this weaving, wrap me up…......

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    <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    LINAJIS RUG OF PASSION
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
    <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    shite… it didn’t work, oh well you get the picture. You betta appreciate it, it took me a freakin’ eternity of redbubble moments.

  • linaji replied

    Jim.. I am flying to your work.. you have made me so very happy…. indeed.. this silly read gets such a wonderful smile from you.. yes.. you knitted this well and I see you own one Jim.. it is obvious however you do.. you must stay married to your work… she is your true love.. that and the sides to you that craw out unannounced like this, I would call you Charming indeed I would.!

  • ambient-1

    ambient-1

    Beautiful imagery linaji! Just stunning!

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses

    Oh this is scrumptious! Ooolalaa just delicious ;) xoxo

  • MarkezzAckui ...

    MarkezzAckui ...

    oh my Lina…..I shouldn’t have read this for now I am blushing uncontrollably…..(lol).....
    .
    .

    this was indeed
    a tasty read :))))

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