Busy Bees
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"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , The Red Writing Room, Up & Coming Writers and Writing: Persuing HappinessThere are one hundred bees buzzing round my mouth
Waiting to find their queen
What can I say to convince them
I am not their taskmaster
Nor can I be ‘bee’ enough to Be there for them
Just keep buzzing you busy bees
Just keep asking for your queen to bee
I will no longer worry for your journey
This is what you have made of it
Centered round my mouth
My orifice that expels
Expletives (only sometimes).
Right now I am ‘Being’
Just for Me
Linaji 2009
F.A. Moore
To Bee or not to Bee that is the question. I think you answered it! lol.
Fav.
JaneSolomon
there is a time for everything and a time when we just have to ‘be’ for ourselves and not for all the other busy little bees….I’m there too Lina!!! xxxx
Quinn Blackburn
Beautifully crafted… certain images here made me think of Oghma the “Honey-mouthed”, one of the Celtic deities of Skill. Patron of Bards and wordsmiths, creator of the Ogham written language, I’m sure he’d be pleased with this lovely wordcrafting! I know I am! Very good work
:) wishing you laughter
kjgordon
You bee da one…........beebee
trwoody
Cute, Very cute…had to laugh today…truly beeeutiful
ShadowDancer
LOVE THIS… and quite on time for something i’m feeling today. miss you Lina. need a call from you soon. xxx
RuthFroehlinger
And so be(e) it!!
Tom Broderick IPA
like ruth comment i agree. tom
Marion Chapman
you are already a queen (bee) – i bet those bees want to take you on a journey.
Fascinating poem!!
gretchen .
this is beautiful sister. i love the ending the most. i’d like to comment more but i’m too busy reading again and again… x o x
Lisa Jewell
Amen my darling Heart,
just for YOU…xxx
erich biemer
bzzzzzzzzzz….........
Farras Abdelnour
oh so cleverly said! like it much lina xxx
Scott d'Almeida
bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz great one,
TeriLee
I love this and you…..love our lil pollinaters have taken over inside your consciousness or is that subconscious?? a bit of both it seems….and this is what it brought you…us…a reminder of that best message you can give…you are the best at being you, so be the best!! :)xoxo
Keith Reesor
What’s the buzz? Tell me what’s happening!!
Delightful!! :)
Martin Muir
If im on your wavelength Linja got it well done!
TheWanderingBoo
beautiful writing