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The Red Writing Room, THE SISTERHOOD and Writing: Persuing HappinessThe last time I sang with my breath I was dancing in
stars and planets.
My lover was magic, but back then
why not so?
I had taken an oath by the river Gangaji
and she blessed us with her eternal waters.
I thought my stomach was not so nice,
but you have taken your fingers and enacted
a skiiing event and landed on a mound of joy.
I feel good as I see you reach your goal
I am closing my eyes to victory
as you finish with a soft moan from
my judges chair
10.
Linaji 2009
robpixaday
Whoa….terrific!!!!!!!
linaji replied
So are you dear PINK R!!
Christie Moses
Damn! I love this one. YOu rock Lady :) xoxo
linaji replied
I just hopped over to your glorious pic.. I am suppose to let go a bit.. but how can I when I come and see such wonderful things to start out my morning??? xxx
NordicBlackbird
cool, Lina lass :))))
xoxo
linaji replied
Cool back baby!! x
Vasile Stan
10
Vasile Stan
11 for enjoying your past from the fluid present…
linaji replied
Ok.. 11 works too!
erich biemer
linaji’s getting her groove on i think…....
(hmmm…....where was she going and why has shoaib been so quiet lately…..LOL)
linaji replied
see comment on one of the other replys.. your too funny!
Tom Broderick IPA
very nice lina. tom
linaji replied
xxx tom. your always here at the right time!
lianne
Wow!!! Some kind of hot lady Lina!! Beautifully articulated to express something almost inexpressible! Talk about rocking!
linaji replied
I am whispering to you .. and smiling,..thank you dear Lianne and your poem this a.m. fit like a glove :=))
kevinmawson
A joyous read Lina!
km.
linaji replied
Kevin.. thanks so much friend!!
Ushna Sardar
its amazing read lina! xo
linaji replied
smiles Ushna.. thanks so much xxx
Farras Abdelnour
compact and beautiful, lina – so cool! xxx
linaji replied
Farras.. your cool back.. I really appreciate your view on my written work.. means the world to me.. I am happy.. xxx
Trenchtownrock
Wonderful ending to this magic…
linaji replied
Trench.. soon the work begins.. again.. twas nice.. it is those dinners you see…. xxx
marieangel
a twist in your poem lovely hope you enjoyed your few days away angelx
linaji replied
not quite back till tomorrow.. just a lazafair day.. walking and I am working this am on some pics.. thanks my Angel..xxx
marieangel
Thank goodness for laptops on the move a sharing tool if ever we knew of one ..smile enjoy…
linaji replied
teehee.. yep.. coffee soon.. with lots of cream and sugar. x
trwoody
What fun skiing can be…...wonderful expression
linaji replied
trwoody.. your work this morning touched me deeply thanks so much!
Linda Ridpath
excellent!!!! makes me smile! so clever! xx
linaji replied
The Desert is next.. no Linda.. not dessert!!! xxxx
Elizabeth Bravo
YES….....I also give it a T E N!!!!! Oh how I miss that kind of ski trip.
linaji replied
Elizabeth.. you have been on my mind so sweet.. I predict a ski trip within the next few months!! Allow! xxxx
autumnwind
10 Indeed! What a poetess you ARE!!!!! xoxoxo
linaji replied
now coming from you? These words make the air sweeter.. xxx!!
autumnwind
aww, I am so touched and had to tell you. what a lovely reply. warmest hugs. xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Ten indeed to the rising ovation of cat calls and whistles. Lol. Xoxo
linaji replied
TASK MASTER HOME TOMORROW.. YOU BETTER GET THE CAT O NINES OUT!! GIVE ME 11!! XXXXlolol
F.A. Moore
Wonderfully written, Lina. :)
linaji replied
Thanks so much Fran!
JaneSolomon
ah…you’re back like a breath of fresh air….I missed you….this is wonderful! xxx
linaji replied
Oh Jane..I feel like being gone? naww.. neva!! LOLOL
Mary Ann Reilly
gives a whole new meaning to skiing:)
linaji replied
being a judge is a wonderful thing Mary Ann.xxx:=}}
ambient-1
Lovely write linaji!
linaji replied
Smiles Robert..thanks!
skinnyman
A lovely piece Linaji :)
linaji replied
forgive me for not responding.. I just thought ‘damn I forgot to tell him’.. “hey…I ADORE YOU!!”
RosaCobos
Somehow…
the breath has got so hot and dry.
Skiing coming from the sliding heavens of Glory.
Poor solitude!!
Reaching out the arms….
while they were slowly vanishing from the light.
Fading, fading….
in a mist of start.
Rosa (I understand many things…. strange ones… conecting with body and heaven.Strange all this. really it is. Singing silence..blast. A hug for your, Lina . Delighted.)
linaji replied
you are so perceptive.. yes.. poor solitude.. lololxxxx
RosaCobos
Sorry… start=stars…ouch!
Lisa Jewell
What a way to start my morning…..incredibly sensual my darling. xxx
Keith Reesor
Lovely…...Linaji!! :)
rodeorose
10.
I love the your stomach described as a ski field:))))
Rachel Davison
You write with beauty and clarity – thank you for sharing it – it’s sublime Linaji! xxx
Hey have you ever come across Paula Meehan’s poetry? I have one of her books, Dharmakhaya, and it is absolutely mind blowing brilliant – and in its simple, direct, pitch-perfect beauty this reminds me of her work… x
gretchen .
hot! ... white hot. 10? hmmm…. i reckon this one is a bit off the scales sister girl, 11.5 ;-) xox