I don't Understand your poem

linaji
Author: linaji
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I don't Understand your poem

I want to be one of the women in Lindsay Bermans female portraits.. this one depicts this poem.. how she is standing waiting for the sign from her lover.. any.. that he is thinking of her today..

Just a silly song and I love the graphics… Love Today
and the original singer.. omg.. so cute..
love love me

I don't Understand your poem belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, ABSTRACT DIGITAL ART AND WRITING, All Out Emotion, Art For The World, Core [C.O.R.E], Digital Abstracts & Patterns, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Friendly General Discussion , Friends of RedBubble, in-between, Light In The Darkness, Midnight Ramblers, On Youth, The Art of Intrigue 2/24, THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming Writers

What do you want me to see from all this

Superlative inaction
..
or
..
leaving me with a moment that dangles
..
like some participle

your whole manner of intending borders on
absolutes or absence thereof
..
you talk from one context and lead me
to nothing
..
begging for something
..
ok
..
I want ‘nothing’ sometimes
..
but today I want
..
figurative
..
literal
..
I want something I don’t have to guess at
..
like
..
how come you can’t just drop me a line
in the middle of the day consisting
of all that is you
and just say
..
I love you
..

Linaji 2009

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    great piece lina! xo

  • linaji replied

    kisses.. to you my dear Ushna! xox

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    ooohh Lina! Straightforward writing! Love it!

  • linaji replied

    you an me dear one.. sometimes it gotta be so! thanks so much!

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    No doubt meant for someone special. Raw, honest, and brilliantly punctuated.

  • linaji replied

    F. A…. you are wonderful… just a day for literal desire! tee hee.

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    so special…............
    aloha…..........
    from
    kj….............

  • linaji replied

    Wow did I miss you my Aloha King!! thanks for the fav too!!

  • valzart

    valzart

    Aww this is lovely sweetheART we can all relate to this ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • linaji replied

    wow Mx. V.. thanks so much! hugs and kiss too!

  • TeriLee

    TeriLee

    Hee Hee….i get that….ohhhh so welll!!! :)xoxoxoxo

  • linaji replied

    you sista.. just a feeling before I am off today.. I got to go!!

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    Exactly sweetness….hate those guessing games. xx

  • linaji replied

    xoxoxo and oh.. xoxoxoxo and this too..xoxoxoxo literally I adore you!

  • navybrat

    navybrat

    but i do understand this one…...it means…....I love you!!! excellent writing…!!

  • linaji replied

    smile and smile again.. you so full of love!! thanks for the extra special fav this time..xox

  • robpixaday

    robpixaday

    BRAVA!!!!!

    LOVE it. So true. So well said!

  • linaji replied

    Chicka!! how are youtoday..?? love sending to you too!!

  • Linda Ridpath

    Linda Ridpath

    very forceful, i can hear you speaking this and really meaning it!!! lovely work xxx

  • linaji replied

    Ahhhh so good to have you back from the world at large.. big hug and thanks Linda..

  • Friederike Alexander

    Friederike Ale...

    Great Piece!!! DEAREST GREETINGS!! I DO love you ;-)..... xox

  • linaji replied

    Wow.. that feels damn good!!! sending you a song.. here..love today

  • Lindsay Berman

    Lindsay Berman

    wonderfully rich honest and exposed, well done

  • linaji replied

    Like your work Lindsay.. should I go shopping in your gallery??tee hee.. you da best!

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    xxx and i you sweetness xxx

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    great work . tom

  • linaji replied

    Hi tom.. thanks so much.. fun!

  • robpixaday

    robpixaday

    LOL…if it doesn’t stop raining here soon I’ll have barnacles on my bottom…otherwise, doing GREAT!! :)

  • aspectsoftmk

    aspectsoftmk

    saying it as it is…::)))...yes. thanks for the coffee talk dear one….you brought big smiles…..xx

  • linaji replied

    Sending you healing big Love!!

  • Vasile Stan

    Vasile Stan

    I don’t Understand your poem either… because you always get I love you’s everyday from so many people. Here’s one from me too: “I love you Linaji!” What can one ask for more?
    Well, you know I’m being facetious here, as I can see you’re looking for a specific “I love you”... I wish I was the target, but I’m a few thousand miles away too close… tee hee! (to quote you).

    ...All that being said, your poem is so unambiguously beautiful and vaguely precise. It is really you and your great artistic soul that’s exposed today. Superb. Again.

  • linaji replied

    ok.. now that’s what I am talking about V. tee hee.. (you know this comment of yours had/has me really tee hee heeing..) and may I say that when you say such things like vaguely precise.. I know you really got this one.. big smile and hugs.

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    love it !!

  • linaji replied

    OH THANKS SO MUCH!!

  • Friederike Alexander

    Friederike Ale...

    Thank youu!!! ;)))... This rocks!! – even though I still like Coldplay better ;)... – ups, may I say that in public??? Hugs!!!! xoxoxoxo

  • linaji replied

    I LEAVE COLDPLAY.. TO YOU SISTA.. I love them too!! but I felt silly today and a friend of mine knows this guy and told me he is sooooooooooo nice in real life!!

  • Epazia Espino

    Epazia Espino

    my father and artist would always say in his thickest Gaelic, keep it simple stupid! he would have loved this piece as do I

  • linaji replied

    Anthea.. I would have loved your father.. and his wonderful accent.. that saying is one I have heard so many times in my life.. and btw.. nice to meet you!

  • Mary Ann Reilly

    Mary Ann Reilly

    like this Lina the ending is fabulous .

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    Wonderful Lina!!!!!!!!!! Simplicity and truth… Always…

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    How come you always write what I feel at the deepest level, but have no words of my own to express? This is beautiful, and I FEEL every bit of it….. you are so richly blessed with your gifts….....

  • linaji replied

    ummmm you feel so wonderful tonight..thank you sweet Wendy. I am blessed with you in my life.. kinda like we been meeting a few lifetimes I am sure.. xox

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice piece linaji….............. would you really not want to have to think about what the poem is on about ??

  • linaji replied

    Oh Sweet Gregory.. sometimes I think it all is toomuch.. I love the joy of metaphor and Allegory and irony.. but sometimes.. as i read brilliance here and also now I go to many readings.. it is over the top for ME.. THAT IS JUST ME.. and sometimes in real life.. I want someone to just stop and say.. I LOVE YOU.

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    I love you !!

  • linaji replied

    X100:=}}}}}}}}}}}}}xo

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Sophisticated way of saying…
    “damm you, bloody lazy bug….”
    “I need you lazy mind!”
    “however enraged your silence makes me feel”
    Rosa (yes…. enwrapped strong feelings….sometimes I feel like saying this to some soul…. good trying Lina….a hug)

  • wasy35

    wasy35

    sometimes we just need to say exactly how we feel, without the metaphors to decipher, another great poem, you are a machine.

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Special and true!! :)

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