Patterns by 5

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Author: linaji
Word Count: 196
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Patterns by 5


Patterns By The Sea

Patterns by 5 belongs to the following groups:

Core [C.O.R.E]

Every day at 3:00pm I sit down and the flood comes
Sometimes in tears
And sometimes it is the sexuality of my love that
transforms me
Like sand particles
Monumental
a flurry of forever on one beach
This one
In South Hampton
Where you hold me with your strong body and say
To me
“you are not going anywhere my diligent lover
My sexy queen bee
Buzz”
My externals all are appeased with your attentive
design
Somehow even your crooked smile fits into the left
Corner of mine.
Our eyes are green pools of spectacular promise
the kind one makes as a kid (5 years old)
then forgets
When as an adult you begin to notice
the patterns
Your physiologist says they are there
Clear as day
Patterns of skyscrapers imploding just when
you felt safe
Patterns of nakedness in paradise where you eat the apple
Because you grew it
Where you find out that all the thoughts of your limitations
Where spoon-fed stories
Concocted with some fake wizards pride
Mixed with a gruel of urban compromise

Patterns by 5
Delayed reaction by 50
Born again by 3:15
Ain’t life grand?

Linaji 2009

  • PJ Ryan

    PJ Ryan

    this piece is grand .. love the concept and the reality of it ..

    Somehow even your crooked smile fits into the left
    Corner of mine

    and THAT is so beautiful x

  • linaji replied

    Oh thank you PJ.. your jagging out my fav line.. xoxo:=D

  • Isa Rodriguez

    Isa Rodriguez

    you are so sexay!!!!

  • linaji replied

    sayyyyy Isa.. I like when you say that!! tee hee..

  • Danica Radman - Tazzina

    Danica Radman ...

    was great pleasure reading this
    so, this will be Corner of mine too:)

  • linaji replied

    tee hee.. you are such a wonderful observer tazzia!! Much Thanks!

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Buzz!! Love it!! :)

  • linaji replied

    birds and beeezzz yah!! xoxo

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    Beautiful.. and picture too.. awesome work dear! :) xoxoxox

  • linaji replied

    thanks Dana.. I appreciate you mentioning the pic.. one of my favs..xoxox

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    wow lina x

  • linaji replied

    :=}xo

  • Vasile Stan

    Vasile Stan

    “Patterns by 5
    A flurry of forever on one beach
    Delayed reaction by 50
    Mixed with a gruel of urban compromise
    Born again by 3:15
    My sexy queen bee”

    This is my re-mix of your amazing symphony of fragrant living by the ocean around 3:00pm
    Lina, you just triggered my subconscious fear of an overwhelming beauty… well, allegorically writing just before midnight.

  • linaji replied

    I love your remix!! A flurry of forever on one beach delayed
    reaction by 50!!
    Bravo.. you transcend all my expectations every time dear V.!!

  • Farras Abdelnour

    Farras Abdelnour

    sensational work my dear

  • linaji replied

    Ferras.. what will it be like to meet you standing? Will I faint? tee hee..

  • Mary Ann Reilly

    Mary Ann Reilly

    yep, it sure is grand…

  • linaji replied

    :=D xo

  • billyboy

    billyboy

    3 minutes would definitely not have been enough…
    Awesome how timeless a mere 15 can feel.
    And how powerfully such a concentration of thought between two souls can transcend…
    The buzzing was SO loud this AM… launch at 10 yours. Direct hit.
    Amazing words QB… and WHERE did that PICTURE come from?????
    I LOVE it!
    xo

  • linaji replied

    well the reason this morning was true.. 15 min right at that time.. hummm that is real cool mr.b.b.
    and that pic that you have commented on.. is one of the series of lucky shots.. till now.. when I know more .. but I kinda like lucky. xxx

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    Just look at the comments. You have inspired so many with your passion. Excellent.

  • linaji replied

    Oh Sweet F.A.!! thanks so much! xox

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Born again and the time is set for this event…..sounds to me you have a plan….a dam fine one at that!

  • linaji replied

    Every day … right on time!! :=D

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    So admire the energy and strength of your writing, perceptive and clear, and with always a touch of playfulness even in your serious moments. It is all a journey, ticket stamped from above—best to tally at station love. Great writing!

  • linaji replied

    best to tally at the station of love..
    Wow.. my fav comment of the day my dear Joe.. thanks so much!

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    wow this is gorgeous!

  • linaji replied

    Hi Cassidy.. much thanks sweet one..xox

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko

    Lina,Lina,Lina…what can i tell you? aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?
    Where you hold me with your strong body and say
    To me
    “you are not going anywhere my diligent lover
    My sexy queen bee
    Buzz”

  • linaji replied

    There you are sweetheart.. how are you!!!???? sending you Linaji Huggsssss xoxoxo

  • JUSTART

    JUSTART

    wonderful writing and…love the image x

  • linaji replied

    Big Kiss and a Hug.. Just.. thanks so much for your being here.xox

  • Larasolnishko

    Larasolnishko

    Oh dear me, where all that men who have to hug us for hours and transfer us into a bee lovers? What a world? sweet smile to you my dear queen…

  • linaji replied

    ahhhh Lara.. you are a breath of fresh Air every every time you appear.. I so do adore thee!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    what a great energy lina! you’re amazing! xo

  • linaji replied

    Wow sweetheart of heARTS!! Love you and thanks so much.. xoxoxo

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    this is written with a hand of beauty and a mind to be reckoned with.. =D

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    this is written with a hand of beauty and a mind to be reckoned with.. =D

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