ACT III
ACT III belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, ABSTRACT DIGITAL ART AND WRITING, All Out Emotion, Core [C.O.R.E], Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Nirvana (Only 1 photographic art and 1 written work will be accepted per day ), THE DIVINE FEMININE, THE SISTERHOOD, Unconventional Artistry - 3 per day and Up & Coming WritersShe tried to speak of her hearts desire
And blew smoke
Vaporous words with radiant expletives
Escaped
Trapped behind a ‘not knowing’
Entangled in desire
Enmeshed in unrealized dreams
She could not get ‘it’ out
She felt a festering conundrum of Zen
Maters beating at her back
A juxtaposition of his and hers
Whipping her
Whiting out
Memories
Of beginnings and endings
Before and afters
Designer Drugs
She created her own,
She is imprisoned by her own foolish heart
She rocks back and forth as if she were
100 years old and she feels all her teeth are missing
She sucks in the air to speak again
And this time
When she tries to speak out what she wants her heart
To say
Cool like a springtime breeze on a Sunday afternoon,
She just
Disappears
Linaji 2009
Al Neaimi
great writing Lina .
linaji replied
I appreciate you! thanks so much.:=}
TeriLee
Very intese…wow….fantastically written…but wow
linaji replied
thanks so much TeriLee… love ya!!
Sally Omar
OMG…Don’t know what words to expess the pictures you have drawn…awesome not enough…
beautiful…doesn’t do it…..profound…more than that….I’ll have to get back to you with a very special
word…I might have to make one up….Love You!!!!!!!! xoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxox
linaji replied
SALLY… O!!!! YOU ROCK MY WORLD!! XOXOXO
Ushna Sardar
Great piece sweet lina!!! huggles xo
linaji replied
UUUOOOOUUUHHHHH HUGGLES.. I MISSED THEM!
helene ruiz
WOW!! Lina…..that trip u took must’ve really got ur mind going!
linaji replied
YAH TIME AWAY FROM COOKING AND GARBAGE!!! LOLOL
XOX
Tom Broderick IPA
great work . tom
kenspics
Masterful verse ….a powerful, raw, emotional outpouring!!!
Astounding!!!!
devotee1
Another fabulous ride, lina! Difficult to read any of your work without going on an emotional Roller-coaster. Splendid writing!
David Friederich
Another wonderful poem from my favorite poet…Thank you, Lina, for sharing your work with us.
linaji replied
David your so very welcome.. I just got back from Seattle and will post pics of Niece and her boyfriend!! Wow David Time sure does fly!! she is 20!!!
Vasile Stan
Lina my friend, this is the most amazing painting in words I’ve seen with my mind’s eyes in quite a while, say, years and years. This is Dali and Magritte gathered on sunny afternoon to depict the feelings of your heart… only to be outshined by your genius at handling emotions in words. My friend, I bow to you for such a talented poetess you are.
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But not to worry Lina, because “She” will be back with a loving and kind vengeance, I know that with certainty… any valley exists only because of the hills around. I see “her” on top of the highest hill around with the wind caressing her cheeks. Oh, what a vista is there on top… all masters saluting each others by thoughts and vibrations, not a word spoken… Say no more!
Gregory John O...
Nice piece linaji….....
RosaCobos
This has touched me…
it remembers me…
I was a child…
then I was walking along the street
when I saw a bakery..and…my desire aroused..
I told her..
“mom…. I am hungry….
with a sort of lament..
and then she asked me…
“Do you want a bread roll..?”
Then I answered…
“But…I am hungry…of something…”
Yes…. what this something was….will be dissapearing as the way your heroine all teeth gone, hundred years of “somethings” will one day… go
Love Lina… (this is one feature… for me.. true)
Rosa
RosaCobos
Hey… not invented story… real true.. as my mom testimonied it…
je, je.
Rosa