one tear
sometimes poets take more than they should
maybe…
THIS WRITING INSPIRED DANILO LEJARDI TO CREATE AN AMAZING PIECE CALLED
A PRIVATE TEAR
THANK YOU SO MUCH DANILO*!
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and then she took his private tear,
and allowed the world to drink from it’s source
for him it felt a bit less
and tawdry
he desired
her
he desired her for him and all the words
in-between a feather bed
the allegories
bedtime stories
and the rhythm of the phrases
she sang him
lullabies of lust.
she smiled at him and said just this one time,
but she lied
and didn’t mean too
he felt his tear after tear fed to the masses
and she smiled and said
tis better,
see how good they feel?
but he did not
then one day
he disappeared
and she was broken
he left a note,
and inside it was one more tear
for you
he said
do with this as you will.
she looked at it’s shine and it’s
innocence,
and she licked it up
and drank him down
there she found out
how wrong she had been
this was precious indeed
so sweet his essence
so priceless his knowing
Then…
she became a river,
and there by her banks
they gathered and drank
and many were healed in spirit
many began to sing the praises of
fulfillment and joy
he stood by on a hilltop looking
down to the waters that she had
become
understanding now his purpose in all
what was her desire to create
and his
to be part of all that she was
and he too saw from the banks of
his own willingness,
nothing had been forsaken
just in fact
expanded.
Linaji 2009
Danilo Lejardi
Hmmm, have to read this again and again; love that “private tear” metaphor. Hmmm…
linaji replied
thank yo Danilo!!
Scott d'Almeida
lovely words;
linaji replied
Hello scott..thanks!
Sally Omar
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! A definite Fav!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxooxoxoxo
linaji replied
I appreciate you Sally.. thanks for the kind words!
nkbellani
Beautiful.
linaji replied
your little icon is precious! thanks so much dear.
giovanni
really enjoyed this alot…
linaji replied
giovanni.. thanks so much.. this happens to mean a lot to me..xo
Nala
Wonderful . . what beautiful words
linaji replied
kind Alan!! thanks sweet friend!
cathrinedp
wonderful. The idea grows into such a profound message. Beautifully written
linaji replied
Thank you much Cathrine!! xo
dawndavies
beautifully written,dawnx
linaji replied
Dawnie.. you da best!!
Blended
Beautiful poem…it conjures beautiful imagery formed of words..thanks for sharing.
linaji replied
Hi Blended.. just joined and appreciate your comments
roy skogvold
stunning work
one of your best Lina.
...roy
linaji replied
this was very important work.. I am so glad you connect too.. but then you are a man with quite a strong insight..xox
helene ruiz
wow!
linaji replied
HUGS Helene!
Ushna Sardar
Excellent written lina! xo
linaji replied
Of all I have written lately I so love this one.. you would find my hearts work of course dear Ushna.. I am so honored…Love Love Love you.!
Astoreth
oh Linaji…sometimes poets do take a bit more than they should…this is absolutely beautiful, quite profound in fact…how nothing was lost in the end, only multiplied…..what a message! xxxx
linaji replied
I have been a bit guilty lately of this one Jane.. thanks for seeing and understanding.. I am lucky.. those who are part of my life love me enough to allow for my sometimes… expansive nature that may get to well,,,, expansive… lolol xoxoxo
MoonSpiral
Wow Linaji…this is more than a poem…it is a mythical story written by a master creatrix!!! It is sublime!!!!!!!
linaji replied
Big Sigh.. thank you so much my sweet friend.. this is an important piece for me..xoxox
Cherubtree
Lovely and oh so sweet..:-)!
linaji replied
Hello Cherub.. thanks so much for your smiles.. mean alot to me!
RosaCobos
I wonder….
will the male’s tears taste likely to the female’s?
She will always be turned into a river..
sweet and ready to go up in couds of glory.
And his… oh… they taste like volcano’s fumes…
turning the nature upside down..
desintegrating the lover’s stillness of heart.
Fluids all the same…
alt and sky drops in dreaming essence.
Rosa
linaji replied
Rosa.. I don’t know today.. perhaps.. tears to rivers are just the way of the world.. and then to the sea.. back to the ever loving grand never ending sea…xoxo
RosaCobos
sorry… salt and sky…...(bloody keyboard)
kreesor
Marvelous writing Linaji!! :)
linaji replied
Hi Keith!! appreciate your read.. and much Thanks!!
ufosIsee
I have watched you grow into this flower ever higher, nicely written softy.. I shall miss you alot.
I’m leaving RB in 4 days.. Be safe be kind rewind from time to time…
linaji replied
I sent you a bubble mail!!! talk to me!!!!!
linaji replied
I am so sad you are gone and I hope with all my heart you keep your promise and get back to me with all that you are becoming.. dear dear man.. you and your family have the ride of your lives.. you brought a tenderness to my heart that seems to linger and I want to thank you for this. No one in their right mind ever ever called me softy.. how you can see past all that is me ..Ms Independent ..in such a short amount of time will stay with me as hope perhaps My value is becoming recognized.. Thanks kind sir.. If I were queen I would doth Kinght thee… xox
Gregory John O...
Nice read. Wonderful Piece !!!
linaji replied
Gregory… Much Much thanks.. xoxo
coffeetea
fantastic writing.
linaji replied
Thank you so much Susan..xox
Shanina Conway
Oh Lina, this is …left me speechless, you are such a talented and beautiful lady, now I understand why Danilo was inspired to create such an amazing image after reading your poem;)
linaji replied
Shanina.. I am greatly honored by the events in the last few days.. I am so full of awe I can hardly contain myslef. I must go swimming or something as It reverberates within. Your comment has me reeling and you are so very kind indeed. thanks so much.
jwinman
beautiful
linaji replied
smile you two.. much much thanks
Little Rascals...
Beautiful!
linaji replied
thank you so much!!
Lenroe
This is Beautiful! This will be read several times in order to take in all that is there.