Second Coming

linaji
Author: linaji
Word Count: 218
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Second Coming

Amazing story… Exceptional Artist, DevineDayDreams comments on this poem. I see her icon and say this icon looks like this poem and she says.. wow I feel this too. The name of her art? silence must be heard ~Now that is uncanny~ Synchronicity as she has NEVER BEFORE COMMENTED ON ONE OF MY POEMS… till today..

My line in the poem is..
Silence likes to be heard

Her title to her art is
Silence Must Be Heard

OMG!!

Her piece below brings me such joy and my experience with her today gives me more A belief that the Universe directs the every little detail.. and I no longer have to look for anything.. the law of attraction brings every thing to me, to each other…THAT WHICH IS LIKEN TO ITSELF IS DRAWN

SILENCE MUST BE HEARD BY.. DevineDayDreams

My heart beats with a joy that grows everyday. My attention to love seems to flourish with believing Love is my birthright. I am not separate from the focus of my attention when it focuses on kindness and joy and the sensual pleasures of relationship.
For YOU.

Second Coming belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, Core [C.O.R.E], Deep Within, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), in-between, Light In The Darkness, Nirvana (Only 1 photographic art and 1 written work will be accepted per day ), The Art of Intrigue 2/24, The Healing Journey, THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming Writers

SECOND COMING

He is my second coming,
My knowing part of me that
Was fading fast
Until that moment
When I heard silence
As silence likes to be heard

It was almost..

Almost like the wind
The Part of the wind
That enters the mystery of the
Solar plexus when you’re out in a storm
Unspoken and free

It’s not so easy to hear
This whispered firmament of desire
But you know it
You feel it
Like the Maiden on the cover of a romance
Novel
Billowing gown lighting all around
Long flowing locks
How did she get there?
Jagged cliffs and all manner of wild beast,
By herself soaked with a passion
That calls him to her

I should let you know he is I
Really,
Sumptuous and delightful
The way I always pictured my toes
Being sucked in my mothers mouth at 3 months
And the utter joy I must have felt for all that
Attention to the details of my Being.

I don’t doubt my connection any more
If he leaves me physically
He will not be gone
I don’t quite know why I know this
As if I shall never miss him
As if I never met him
But am Him

Because I felt the truth about us
In the rain.

Linaji 2009

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

    WOW such passion :)

  • linaji replied

    Thank you so much Patricia.. xox

  • H M Bascom

    H M Bascom

    Very passionate and beautiful.

  • linaji replied

    I appreciate you Helen. Thanks so much.

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    Simply gorgeous…
    ... “I don’t doubt my connection any more
    If he leaves me physically
    He will not be gone
    I don’t quite know why I know this
    As if I shall never miss him
    As if I never met him
    But am Him

    Because I felt the truth about us
    In the rain.”

    So beautifully said. Thank you for the smile :))))))))))))))))))))

  • linaji replied

    Oh Dana.. so glad you are here and smiling .. what amazing perspective you are bringing us.. xox

  • nkbellani

    nkbellani

    I’m just, beginning to understand poetry….sounds supeb

  • linaji replied

    Kumarji.. you and poetry go as far back as the sea and the fish.. you get all of it.. just a feeling.. and feelings are precious!

  • lucin

    lucin

    The imagery in this is splendiferous. “You feel it like the Maiden on the cover of a romance novel.” AH LOVE. I hope this is autobiographical. :) x

  • linaji replied

    tee hee.. your absolutely incorribible!

  • Vasile Stan

    Vasile Stan

    Wow, it tickles the best of my muscles into a masculine eruption of joy and bliss.
    There’s such a powerful imagery in your utterly beautiful words of engagement in the unspoiled sense of Ohm.

  • linaji replied

    Unspoiled and intense.. thank you so much Vasile! xox

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    special love. x

  • linaji replied

    xoxo thanks Lovely ONe.

  • DevineDayDreams

    DevineDayDreams

    WONDERFUL!!!!!

  • linaji replied

    Your icon reminds me of this poem.. your work is simply incredible and sensual in a very abstract manner.. and I do love the abstract.. I appreciate your view.

  • Nala

    Nala

    How wonderful and powerful , , i can feel this and the connection well done Alan x

  • linaji replied

    Connection is everything.. thanks so much Alan..xox

  • Andrew Price

    Andrew Price

    All of the above, I love it.

  • linaji replied

    Big Smile and thanks Andrew!

  • DevineDayDreams

    DevineDayDreams

    I love your work as well, especially the poetry! if you want I can send you the image so that you can add it to these wonderful words!! X!

  • linaji replied

    Ohhhhhhh I would be honored.. our first collab!!

  • DanaMS

    DanaMS

    I feel it Linaji!! Love is stronger then me! LOL! Why should I fight with IT! :)))))))) xoxox

  • linaji replied

    lolol ain’t that the truth.. ahhhhh I feel you!

  • Nala

    Nala

    Yep thats what its all about and with it what is there :-)

  • Abeona

    Abeona

    wow thats an amazing piece lina i love it well done xoxox

  • linaji replied

    you are so welcome.. I love when you feel something this a way!!

  • coffeetea

    coffeetea

    Your title is so great!! here :))Lina. great creative art :) congrats.

  • linaji replied

    Oh thanks so much Susan.. your just a Gem!! lovely words and so nice feeling..xox

  • aspectsoftmk

    aspectsoftmk

    beautifully written emotions…lovely lina and so very strong…xoxox

  • linaji replied

    Good God I am still pissed.. I love you and what your doing.. I know your so active..but I feel like putting my ass kicking boots on.. whew.. I am still fulll of it.. damn!

  • linaji replied

    Oh.. btw.. thanks so much.. (fuming still)

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    very nice work. tom

  • linaji replied

    SENDING YOU A HUG TOM..XOX

  • coffeetea

    coffeetea

    Yep, very precious Gem…not cheap :))Thanks . just love your title :)

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Beautiful

  • DevineDayDreams

    DevineDayDreams

    That is very beautiful Lina!!! I am so happy that we stumbled upon eachother this way!!! lot’s of LOVE!!!!!!

    Daisy~’*-

  • linaji replied

    DAISY.. what I find so very very AMAZING IS THE LINES
    FROM THE POEM.
    SILENCE LIKES TO BE HEARD

    YOUR TITLE

    SILENCE MUST BE HEARD

    HOLY COW!

  • kenspics

    kenspics

    What a fabulous story you tell…and what an achingly beautiful collaboration!!!

  • linaji replied

    KEN.. I AM SO EXCITED.. I love this place.. and YOU!
    I so appreciate your support and joy.xox

  • MoonSpiral

    MoonSpiral

    Beautiful example of the Law of attraction and beautiful poetry to go with it!!! I swear the internet has this wierd psychic vibe to it…we are linking up….hearts and minds, funny how technology is playing a part in our ever evolving consciousness!!

  • linaji replied

    Omg.. you are speaking what is in my heart.. I am so joyful that we are part of one of the tools we will be using till this internet becomes obsolete and we begin the process of just reading and sending our thoughts thoughout.. I know with our smallness still we would think this would be too much for us to handle.. but as we evolve this will be a common way for us to be ONE in time space reality as we are in pure positive energy ..but you know this darling Moon!!!.. yahhhhh!! xoxo

  • Teresa P. Pelaez

    Teresa P. Pelaez

    Beautiful lina!

  • linaji replied

    Darling Teresa!!! feels so good you here!

  • Erhan OZBIYIK

    Erhan OZBIYIK

    Great !! GREAT !!!!
    Wonderful story !!!

    I like this “path” thing lol :)
    What a great math is that !!!

    HUGS :)

  • linaji replied

    Erhan.. you are such a perfect example of this strong law .. thanks so much for your JOY!!!!!

  • Erhan OZBIYIK

    Erhan OZBIYIK

    :) I am a simple person Linaji… :)
    Anytime, welcome Sister ! :)

  • linaji replied

    Simply W O N D E R F U L!!!!!! tee hee.. we are riding .you and I on the river of well being.. let go of the oars!!!! yippie!!

  • Romo

    Romo

    beautiful passionate writing….goes very well with the image….great collab:)

  • linaji replied

    Hi Robin! thanks so much for your sweet smile! xoxo

  • kreesor

    kreesor

    I am so glad you write Linaji!! It gives me wonderful things to ponder and draws such amazing pictures in my mind!! :)

  • Sensiworld

    Sensiworld

    Wonderful !!

  • linaji replied

    HI SWEET HEART!!!!!! how waS THE vaca?xoxo

  • Sensiworld

    Sensiworld

    It was great Lina, pure luxery :)) Very relaxed now, all soft and smooth :)))

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    Sumptuous and delightful
    The way I always pictured my toes
    Being sucked in my mothers mouth at 3 months
    And the utter joy I must have felt for all that
    Attention to the details of my Being.
    I love these lines, the whole story is passionate and erotic, brilliant gorgeous xxxxxxxxxxx

  • linaji replied

    Dear Carlotta P.. you are a blessing!! thank you so much!
    xox

  • avalyn

    avalyn

    that’s an angel talking…...... how divine! XX

  • linaji replied

    I enjoyed this day and your revelation of light and your heart beating and loving.. thank you Avalyn.. so very much!

  • Danilo Lejardi

    Danilo Lejardi

    Love this!

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    You write such a beautiful truth…..it comes from the deepest part of you…..and me….and each of us…...
    I recognize so much of myself and my own journey within your poetry….and yet you say it in a way I can only but dream…....

  • linaji replied

    Wendy .. you are far to kind with me and my words.. I shall never forget the first poem you sent me with our exchange. I was floored you had touched a part of me that you saw so clearly..
    By Wendy Slee….
    _Then as if through deep forests,
    With their breath held waiting
    Comes a stirring, a movement, anticipating…
    Leaves awaken, heart quickens, limbs lift and extend
    To receive the cool caress of a long welcome friend.
    And you are here,
    You the wind,
    It is you that I know,
    Yet know not where you come from, nor where you will go.
    A free spirit you pass by me,
    Yet somehow remain,
    Swirling around me and through me,
    Easing the pain…

    I ache to just hold you, keep you here for all time
    But I can’t catch the wind
    Cannot grasp what’s not mine….
    If I close my fingers, I’ll hold nothing but air…
    If I reach out to possess you, it’s myself I’ll ensnare…
    So I stand in your path, feel your breath on my face
    And just bask in your spirit
    As it moves through my space

    In the silence of your passing, the emptiness wake,
    There’s a stillness that echoes with all you evoked
    The power and beauty of the zephyr flies free
    But your essence and magic has become part of me_
    .....................................
    this is fine fine poetry my friend and I so honor your presence in my life. Sisters we I know, and for me you are this wind, sometimes I wonder where you are, but then lo I hear a whisper and a rustling of the leaves.. and you appear, magnificent and golden like your icon. I so appreciate you dear friend.
    xox

  • JenLand

    JenLand

    So lovely Linaji…........

  • linaji replied

    Jen .. thank you so much for your view.. xox

  • colorblind

    colorblind

    lovely…..i enjoyed my stay in viewing this wonderful
    bravo to you

  • Cherubtree

    Cherubtree

    Beautiful! You are such a romantic! You remind me of myself when I was a lot younger..:-)

  • Vasile Stan

    Vasile Stan

    Youth is not a state of mind, mind you… it is a state of heart… let us make no mistake here.
    Couldn’t keep my mouth shut… lol.

    That being said Lina, your almost entire “love metaphor” is quite clear to me, except one thing which beats the s… out of me: your exuberant “In the rain”. I will not sleep well tonight if I won’t be able to figure it out… so, Lina, please help me, un-speak me.

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    That would be….
    self love and respect…
    impregnated silences…fullfilled
    of our own essence.
    I start when I think of him too…
    and he pressing my consciousness…
    yes….you are always in love,
    love for what it was…
    is…or impregnates the future
    with the smell of breast milk.
    I tend to beleive what I read….in a fashion
    and the sucking of your little toes….
    still tickles my tongue.
    I cannot even dream this could have
    happened to me, and may to you.
    My love is coming out from narrow passages,
    straining my whole being…
    and like the head of a neonatus….
    deforming my most intimate feelings.
    Rosa (good….thousands personages for a single one….love for you Lina)

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