Incongruent Realities
Inspired by my dear friend Vasile Stan Ageless, Glorious and Bold. thank you Vasile. His piece is called
Principles of Lust: incongruent realities, bundled and pickled
Incongruent Realities belongs to the following groups:
Core [C.O.R.E], Deep Within, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), The Art of Intrigue 2/24, The Healing Journey, THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming WritersI HAVE A MAP of the city lights tucked neatly between my arms and I have not given you back the onerous signs of love you seem to need when the world is red
Spilling form from me
Then you telling me there are luxury signs everywhere.
I can’t take that as truth
There is a square root to the end of your caress
So, why do you lay with me?
Bundled and pickled,
Plucked and pruned,
Nullified and void as promised
Then turning to our proper perspective
Perspective that gives room for fish to fly
And worlds to pass through each other with out much ‘to do’ about nothing.
Oh, I think you know,
My Lust is gaping and gripping your sensibilities
And you rely on that map I have,
To find you’re way out.
Stop at any fill up station
Where they sell sea shells and souvenirs of a past that is slipping away
From us both.
Find a copy of your dreams
The ones you sold to the others
The ones you never seemed to share
As I stood by and watched you with longing
Trust to rust
End to end
Our incongruent realities that
Dominate now.
I think we’re lost.
Linaji 2009
Vasile Stan
You made out of my simple art a symphony in words… I am flat out honored, Linaji. Not to mention tickled pink. Thank you soooo much my friend. Mwaa (five times, for good measure).
linaji replied
Vasile.. I think I dreamed of you.. you and your amazing bright Arua!! or was that the Sun? tee hee.. thank you friend, for all that you are… which in my book starts with the intense and wonderful talent you bring here of which it is easy to be inspired by..xoxo
nkbellani
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linaji replied
A song to remember…
Rachel Davison
Dump that one! Nice writing Linaji : )
linaji replied
I am dumping all the baggage RD!! xox
Sally Omar
Oh, Lina, what an awesome collaboration…Bravo to you both!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxo
linaji replied
Sally as you know ..art is indeed an inspiration for words..xox
Astoreth
Linaji….words that would be hard to ever forget….well done my dearest friend. Such a powerful collaboration too! Peace is yours. xxxx
linaji replied
Ms. Jane.. you are such a wonder!! Inspired joy comes from you all the time.. xox
Nala
How lovely and as always great work well done Alan
linaji replied
Alan.. thanks so much.. hope Your Sunday is full of the sound of quack quacks!!!
Gregory John O...
Wonderful !!!
linaji replied
thanks so much Gregory!!
Katya Lavorovna
Intoxicating. A heavy, heady mixture, both pieces. This shows a maturity that can only come from having lived and seen life unfold in all its twists and turns. One heck of a ride. Bravo!
-Kay
ArcadiaTempest
A conversation to commit to the need for self preservation…..to speak of selfishness that was not yours…...I sensed anger, regret, only the glimpse of a tear and ultimately a blankness of nothing…...and all this in only 200 odd words of verse. I send you this a miracle…...look in the mirror Linaji…..there is your miracle darling XXXXX
drewjthomas
ah! yes! another worth reading! thank you!
—drewjthomas
Mary Ann Reilly
like the collaboration, Lina. Strong work, both.
C J Lewis
Terrific collaboration … great art & words :)xoxo
roy skogvold
lovely poetry Lina.
Keith Reesor
Incredible poetry Linaji!! A beautiful painting of words!! :)
linaji replied
Hi lovely one.. Hope you have a glorious Sunday.. you woke me up!
DanaMS
What a wonderful writing! You are a magician with your words! :))) xoxoxoxox
Nala
Well sat in the garden in the sun and its full of Birds and the Ducks are chilling in the hot tub so they are happy lol and you
linaji replied
It is sunny but ohhh the wind the wind the wind!!! I feel special today!! kinda quacky!! tee hee
nkbellani
a smooch
avalyn
......there’s a square root to the end of your caress…....... stopped me…......energy slump….....
I could FEEL the logic overwhelm…............ what you doin’ with this cool heart OH GORGEOUS ONE!!! XXX