TENDERNESS

linaji
Author: linaji
Word Count: 209
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TENDERNESS

Tenderness..

I broke down a man to his tenderness.
His curious beliefs are suspended as he forges the
Twinkling behind the twinkle
The soul behind the suss.
I had tried to figure out

He was lost in a passion of disbelief

Now;

Allowing

Discovering

There is nothing to catch up on
Nothing lost in 25 years except stories
Like mine,

Divine,

Or Not,

Mine,
Just another set of 25 years that seemed to have had
Some of what He thought he wanted,
But now has

NOW

Complete package
Delivered to him at the stroke of midnight
Everything!
All in a smile really,
Juicy and un-contrived and un-holy
Because it is the essence of that which

He-IS

Shining forth,

It is all of him that is consumed in a teardrop of
His own
When he looks at her and just feels like
Being there,
When he doesn’t know or care about the
Morrow,
Solid and faithful
He becomes in his own world
Reflecting
Pondering
Out-pouring

Out pours so much in that moment of knowing

He sees no loss

And Feels ‘all found’

Because… all the roads have led him here

With her,
Kissing deep
Like a well that runs all the way around
Forever.

Linaji 2009

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    sometimes words just fail me….love you Lina! xxxx

  • leann55

    leann55

    You truely are amazing Lina! Wonderful!

  • Keith Reesor
  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    this is so romantic.. the journey of feeling again, finding what you didn’t know you were missing… finding that ‘home’, the sense of being where you belong. lovely dear linaji.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Absolutely awesome…you never fail to amaze me with the beauty of your writing!!!!! xoxoxooxoxxo

  • nkbellani

    nkbellani

    superb

  • Nala

    Nala

    What wonderful and meaning words , , so lovely , , , you could write for me anytime , , , love what you do Alan :-)

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Love is there….
    acting and reflecting.
    Tenderness is an attitude.
    Sometimes a reservoir of inner childhood.
    Is that acting as an immediate relaxing pill..
    in the relationship with women-men, woman-woman…men-men?
    How can find Nirnava in a rosary of reflections….reflexive soul wandering?
    Ma be …. tenderness….
    unthought..
    may be.
    Rosa

  • coffeetea

    coffeetea

    surely he was with great imaginations over the sparkles etc in the time. let fun to now, soul to forever. Some values are true values in life, some spend whatever they have cheaply…lol. he’s great for home anyway. Fantastic work! surely wonder form:)

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Wonderful piece…... I know I must rid myself of desire..is that a desire.. and can I find what I need once rid of it when what I desire is my only need ??

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