The Sands of Insignificance

linaji
Author: linaji
Word Count: 230
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The Sands of Insignificance

*this poem was completely inspired by Billyboys Image below called
Insignificance

Thank you Billy.

The Sands of Insignificance belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, ABSTRACT DIGITAL ART AND WRITING, Core [C.O.R.E], Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), in-between, Light In The Darkness, Seachanges, The Art of Intrigue 2/24, The Healing Journey, THE SISTERHOOD and Up & Coming Writers

We found ourselves one day,
On a sandy beach expanse,
Blue water and dynamite dreams
Peerless purpose
Relentless, we discovered our worth
Through a lesson in sand

We sat down and picked up a grain each
And you said:
“Do you think there would be enough
Sand if these two were missing?”
And I said:
“Who knows the life of sand my darling.
Perhaps without these two grains,
Many like them would not know who they were
And then,
The entire beach would disappear!”

You laughed and kissed me hard,
You even touch my breast in the middle
Of the day!
You then told me how much this
Feeling of Joy was important
And that you would do your very best to find
Ways of sustaining its cure

And I felt whole and perfect in that moment.

We held each other in that spot where
Forever ness meets a friend
And never again feels alone.
Where doubt is swept away by
Our painted breath,
Our lapping tongues circling the embers
Of veins and skin and bone,
Yielding more knowledge to be remembered
By our minds and our hearts.

I had to catch my breath as the sun turned our
Classroom into tones of Gold and cornflower blue
Meant for the eyes of Gods and Goddesses.
We two
On the Sands of Insignificance
Our lives became anew.

Linaji 2009

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor

    Two grains of sand are as precious as an entire ocean to the pearl that is weaved by them. But to the vast sky, two grains of sand are hardly even noticed. It all depends on where you stand. Beautiful, Lina.

  • linaji replied

    I don’t think I have told you how much I do love you Judi Taylor!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxooxoxoxoxxo

  • linaji replied

    Sally how you do it i don’t know!! Thank you so very much!

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    fabulous written art linaji,dawnx

  • linaji replied

    the pairing is thrilling for me Dawnie!

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    OMG, LET ME BE A GRAIN OF SAND, HOW GORGEOUS YOU MAKE SUCH A SMALL GRAIN SO HUGE, BRILLIANT WRITING GORGEOUS XXXXXXXXXXXX

  • linaji replied

    Poster child of the most coolest comment ever!!! thanks so much Carlotta!! and the sands of love are all around you today!!!

  • valzart

    valzart

    Lovely Linaji sweetheART ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • linaji replied

    Kisses you happy hippy huggelz!

  • Marion Chapman

    Marion Chapman

    brilliant written response to the image. love the reference to the tiny grains and the tiny people too. wonderful stuff.

  • linaji replied

    Marion.. appreciate this wonderful comment.. yah.. that’s indeed where the sand grains came from!!

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Magical writing that reflects a magical soul. xx

  • linaji replied

    Hi Darling One.. appreciate your view!

  • linaji replied

    PS.. thanks for the fav!!

  • blamo

    blamo

    Excellent co-lab

  • linaji replied

    Thanks so much Tone!!

  • Andrew Price

    Andrew Price

    Yes! Magical indeed!

  • linaji replied

    Hi Andrew you wondermate!! thanks so much!

  • Dawne Olson

    Dawne Olson

    You are such a brilliant word-smith! Great thought provoking writing Lina. I really love the comment Judi made too—what a tremendous perspective. I really am honored to be in the company of such brilliant women!

  • linaji replied

    yes Judi truly touched my heart with this one. Thanks so much Dawne I always rejoice when I see your work being posted and you here.. thanks so very much. Lina

  • aspectsoftmk

    aspectsoftmk

    i agree with judi…....the words melt with photo…and your soul knows her echo…great coffee this morning….i am off to swim…love you lina..xoxo

  • linaji replied

    I so appreciate your kindness this morning and your understanding too. I know you feel me.. you are a great part of my life friend.. Love you Terri.

  • TeriLee

    TeriLee

    WOW…I am withut words …..you are amazing…

  • linaji replied

    Sending you PM hugs.. and Love.. xoxoxoxo

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    you took me to another place and moment in time exactly when i needed that journey, beautiful collab! love you, beautiful soul.

  • linaji replied

    So nice to come home to such a wonderful comment.. thanks so much for fav and for your equally beautiful SELF!

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    kj….............on the sand….............

  • linaji replied

    Right on the sand…

  • MistressZombie

    MistressZombie

    Simply beautiful.

  • linaji replied

    Thank you MistressZombie.. it is wonderful to meet you.

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Remember a beach towel or blanket is important on the sand!! You don’t want those grains getting in places they don’t belong!! :)

  • linaji replied

    what have you been doing in the sand???? lolo

  • buzzy

    buzzy

    your close obseravtions towards every single aspect shows your brilliance!

  • linaji replied

    Buzzy.. I am seeing you here and everywhere.. you make my heart sing! xoxo

  • TeriLee

    TeriLee

    smooooooch…...sending them right back atcha!

  • billyboy

    billyboy

    Wow BabyJi, I have been so caught up in work these past couple of days… so much so that I hadn`t fully realized the beauty of what you`ve done here… and I am so chuffed that you found this image in my pf and chose it to illustrate your heart felt prose. You are amazing in your ability to take an idea and play it to us in your imagery of written word, and it`s even more amazing when you play it next to a picture that means so much to me.
    Thank you for making my millenium.

  • linaji replied 22 days ago

    Hi Billy I never replied to this and as I see people have found this piece I wanted to say hello and that well I just love this work and your image.. It was one of the nicest and the best collabs I have ever done. I know you know that your work and you have inspired me to gigantic proportions and I am so happy to see a memory of you sometimes that really rings true!!

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Your imagery is without doubt that of a true poet :)))
    The words you place here and there dance together so beautifully…..you are the real deal XXX

  • linaji replied

    Wow certainly a wonderful thing to say coming from a woman I greatly admire.. Your comments are always so uplifting.. xoxo

  • Cherubtree

    Cherubtree

    So lovely..you are very good at painting a picture!!

  • linaji replied

    Thank you so much Cherubtree

  • Martin Sanchez

    Martin Sanchez

    Amazing peace of work there.

  • hollypaino

    hollypaino 22 days ago

    Your work inspired me to write, and I am no poet. I fell in love again after many years of being sad and bitter, and this helped me find the words for that next plateau. Thank you.

  • linaji replied 22 days ago

    Hi Holly .. thanks so much for your imput and your feelings. This was a wonderful pleasure to create.

  • Christie  Moses

    Christie Moses 22 days ago

    Absolutely fantastic!!!! Your writing is just always so gorgeous in a realm of its own. Such beauty in you, lovely Lina xoxo

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock 22 days ago

    Amazing writing my friend…

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