You Frighten Me Ray
I was meandering thru my dearest Co-Creator and friend TeriLee’s work
and found on the top ..thank god, one of my favs she wrote a while back…Which inspired me to write this little didy.. both of our pieces about True Love and loss via
the Real American Way!!!
Quid Pro Quo and the Fake Leg
TeriLee
Harvey was in love
She didn’t want much to do with him
Until an accident took her leg
He told her he loved her
She snubbed him
He began to beg
She figured she would settle
Because of her mishap
She had a prosthetic limb
She decided to marry Harvey
The odds of finding a “good man”
Were looking pretty dim
She tried to make him what she wanted
No more drinkin’
No more smokin’
No more late nights at Grizzly’s pub
He could never be good enough
But his love for her was undaunted
She turned his ranch house in to a show place
She told him to say “Hello”
“Howdy Ya’ll” was not allowed
His music was a waste
His friends were all too raw
She needed a more sophisticated crowd
But the morning she threw his dog out the door
Well…..that was that
Harvey could take no more
His wife, he begged for all her love
Went over a cliff
With one gentle shove
Her leg he still holds dearly
For the love they could have had
That has ended
But now he sees things clearly
There was so much more
That she could have loved him for
So he drilled a hole in her big toe
He turned her leg into a bong
Smoked a bowl and sang this song
“Goodbye my sweet,
It was a treat,
Too bad you had to go
But, you forgot…
Quid pro quo”
You Frighten Me Ray belongs to the following groups:
Core [C.O.R.E] and Light In The DarknessYou frighten me Ray
Your tinted glasses reveal
A naked man
The reflection is Rosy
Wasn’t that her name?
You been given me fruit fly for
Breakfast.
I see em floating Ray
I see em in my beer
Beer for breakfast and finished with
Mustard and pretzels and your sigh.
Ray,
You have a way though
I know
You walk over to me and show me how
To shoot
For dinner
Jack Rabbit
Fast and furious rabbits.
Like you are to me on a Saturday night
Ray
Once a month when you watch
The dancing show
And you look at me and I shake my head
No
But you take me with your fingers and
Suck me with your tongue
Ray it’s time to tell you
This livin here ain’t no fun
This is what I never dreamed of Ray
The Sands in Vegas never come our way
Desert land and the Taliban
You and your hate for all that is not you
Ray
I am done here
And we are through.
Linaji 2009
Tom Broderick IPA
wow kicked him out. tom
linaji replied
lololo dats RIGHT!!
dpennyor
WOW, ray, you’re outta there!!! awesome work the two of you!!
linaji replied
LOLOL YOU DA BOMB BRO!!! XOXOXO
TeriLee
am still laughin…omg this is so great…he he he….feels good to just enjoy the benefits of being a writer huh? :)))))xoxo luv ya!!
linaji replied
tee hee..you sure opened up my life today.. I am having a ball.. I really have to thank you for the Joy of my day!!! xoxoxoxo
dpennyor
LOL… you’re the sweetest too…
dlmorrow
Real nice, linaji. Have you written music for this as well?
linaji replied
Oh David!!! your so inspiring.. I was going to write you a bubble mail today..just got on .. I am looking for a writer of music for an idea i have had. Really your site is amazing and I long to hear the tunes!! So here is the secret.. before i clicked onto you.. I asked the Universe to connect me with someone amazing..and poof!! thanks!
Tom Broderick IPA
good woman. tom
linaji replied
smile…
ufosIsee
I like the clever words displayed and meaning softy..
linaji replied
Yah sweet one.. I am inspired by friends.. I actually had this piece written and did not want to scare anyone.. so when I talked with my gal pal.. TeriLee.. and was reminded of her work that freaked everyone out.. we collabed.. it is fun.. being a writer..sometimes I just don’t know where i get these ideas!! you know it tooo!!
Amber Elizabet...
LOVE YA LINA xxx
linaji replied
what a sweet giff!! or is that gift!! thanks sis!
megrag53
Poor Ray got the boot. That’ll teach him. Maybe Rosy will take him in.
Enjoyed, Lina. Keep up the good work.
Greg
linaji replied
I do think he went to Rosy’s house.. oxoxo
Faith Donovan
Time to pack his bags dear! You’ll be better without him! And don’t let him take that beer! We’‘ll order some hot dogs from NY streets and have a party whole long week!
linaji replied
lolololol Ohh Faith.. I so adore you.. I wish right now I could fly to New YOrk.. I would right this very minuet.. my heart hurts.. i just got another bash to it and feel terrible!!! help me!
linaji replied
better today my sweet.. much.. and still want to pack for NYC!
lucin
Here’s to all the women who can move on! Great fun this. Thanks for bringing terilee to attention.
linaji replied
she is completly amazing! thanks so much
nkbellani
lol…so this is your gentle side?
fagraphics
You are so wonderful!! Great and insightful writing once more!!! :
)))....Sending you a very big hug!!! (going to bed now ;))...)....CU!!! :-)))Scott Bricker
man, you are brutal to your lovers…why were they lovers in the first place? (just a rhetorical question…)
Faith Donovan
Oh Darling.. I’m so sorry You are hurt… I wish I was there to hold your hand and we could watch Mamma Mia 5 times and drink apple martinis and then we could cry or laugh together depends how wasted we would be… My thoughts and love with you Linaji :)) xoxoxoxox
David Friederich
I like the toughness of this one, Lina. The imagery is nasty, Ray is a louse, and the readers are cheering for the speaker for saying “good riddance to Ray”.
Gregory John O...
So there is a spare room going…
Good one linaji
Keith Reesor
A woman with the courage to say “Enough’s Enough!!” :)
Trying to catch up, but the time gets away and time again to call it a night!!
Sweet dreams Linaji!! :)
Arletta
Very interesting! You know, if I hadn’t read the description, I would have been telling Ray to run! It sounds like lunacy; but, what about love, given or lost, doesn’t?
Amber Elizabet...
nope just comes naturally when you love your friendssssssssss
Amber xxxx
Tom Broderick IPA
ok for you i shall smile. tom
linaji replied
your smile is so bright and warm tom.. thank you.linaji