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oh wow Lina… so poignant and beautiful… love to you beautiful one…

Yes indeed Linda… you truely do draw with words… a picture may say 1000 words but your words paint 1000 pictures in my mind….
Just fantastic!

And Then there was more. One thing that is “THE GUARANTEE OF LIFE” is that All things will change. Do you realize your moving at 865 miles an hour…even when your standing still ” – ))

I didnt read it.. I felt it ” – P

You humble me sweet Linaji….your words so deeply moving….i feel this…so intensely….must read again…and again…

omg, darling Lina, this is a very powerful poem (the best writing I have read of yours). I truly hope it is not so literal as I read it, because I imagine you loved dearly by someone who is your “knight”. If that is not so, it should be. You are beautiful in every way, and will “have that him of 20 years”. I cannot imagine otherwise!

Power writing Linaji….. :>)

ditto xo

Dear sister….. I FEEL your place in these words…. or their place in you, as they come pouring out…..... Sending you a big hug…you are not alone although at times the journey must surely feel that way. Just remember the sunlight always shines most beautifully after a little rain.

You can be so empathetic of life and its ups and downs… Bravo..
Chuck..

I Like it !!

damn! don’t you just hate it when they sneak up on you like that? But then, those days are also like a big arrow, pointing to something and reminding us of that which we have overlooked. Never subtle or gentle either….... just a big old pointer at a part of us that needs more attention and TLC…..

There is much love in this world Lina and I’m sending mine to you.
Tomorrow is a new day for us to learn and grow from yesterday. I hope you’re Ok.
xox

We know so little of what frames and awaits us. This poem expresses to me the presence of living in the day. Painful at time. Joyous as well. Peace to you.

Wow. Chilling and well written.

” – )) SMILE

You have moved me deeply, as all those who read and felt this. This pain is also felt by others only without the blood except that left our heart through our tear ducts.

Did my poem inspire you to write this?... You have no worries, maybe setting you goals alittle high. Or move to another city… Because someone will find in you all the beauty we see… Your the softest light any man would treasure…

Well written and heartfelt words Lina. Know how you feel sister…went through the same thing during the change that woman’s inflictions all women face…and yes, it is terribly hard being alone and waiting for that Mr Right to come along…he will come along for you…one day and probably when you are no longer waiting/looking…out of the blue but as Hook said above…the only guarantee of life is…..change. Cheer up my friend…you are not alone…we all love you :)xoxoxo

life has been full of many men and lovers Lucky you…wish I could say the same :)) You sound much cheerier now…good…dont’t like to see you…or anyone for that matter…upset. Love to you to sister :)xoxoxo

You do that to me also… CJ.. Trudi, sleepyeyes. and Arcadia, always put a smile on me…

Wow, linaji – this is powerful stuff – beautifully written – well done, my friend :-D

“Alone in my bed with a picture of you.”
Heartbreaking. Lovely.
ohhh how wonderful it felt to hold onto the flesh and believe it was static and would stay and make all things just right.. what a full blown wonderful feeling
Whoa! Very powerful stuff Linaji!

Mmm hmm .. as usual, I seem to have missed something. Interesting writing, though, dar; and, some of which I can really enter into the feelings of. Poor dar!

wassup, come, give me a hug n’ all will be right…...

So many elements create longing.. it is not ‘man’ nor affections.. it is seeing my youth in the body of someone else.. it is feeling like wanting not to really know anything.. cause in the end we don’t know shit.. it is feeling like I want to Break Dance and they never haD IT WHEN MY KNEES WORKED.. it is missing so much running into the wind and thinking that there waits the love of my life.. and all will be full of Loves bodys and loves plans.. future .. then Kumarji.. this passes too.. and here I am.. having written a wonderful piece and tears like a kid … feeding my soul to remind me that where I am now is so wonderful too.. that the going back is simply not going to happen.. and here and now is better than any time in my life.. so shit.. wouldn’t it be nice if I got the knowledge I do now at friggen 20.. I would most likely by the age of 30 be a guru and not need anyone any way.. so there it is.. just moments.. alls this is is just moments and moments of whatever we choose to feel.. Life is so very amazing.. and if I had not broke down.. would I have ever seen the love of you and the many I have here.. I felt so tenderly held by everyone… and the ones that only faved.. needed this poem too.. I felt kinship and glory and love and I felt me return with gifts beyond measure.. So here is what a little lonliness did for me Kumarji.. it gave me more than it took from me.. I love your careful and tender voice too.. I am fine now.. hours later.. I have spoken to my brother my niece and they too were part of the road back inside my smile.. Now I am here in my smile Kumarji.. and all is Well.. xox

I’m stunned with your words lina! well deserved! congratulations to being featured! what a great written! bless ya! huggles and love XOXOXOXO

oh my such powerful writing!! has me in tears for you my dear friend. you truly are a fantastic friend to so many of us here and we love you so…

thank ya so much lina! we are really honoured to see you guys love Core! ...you love Core! ..we love you too sweetheart! you are such a sweet soul! kindly keep letting us know if ya like or dislike and thing about group! and please keep posting us your great work! thank you so much for you kind support and love! MWAHHH
Huggles and love XOXOXOXO

And .. yeah we are waiting for your lovly tee! would love to see you there!
Mwahh

Aww sweetheART don’t be sad life is fullof surprises you never know what’s coming around that corner!!..could be Him’ ;}happy hippy hugglez

so sad and poignant and beautiful and skillfull and certainly a picture of words xxxxx

Sweet Lina…... I know that there are so many hearts that need so much love right now. It seems that not only is there a flu bug going round, but breaking hearts too! I love you my friend!

Congratulations Lina!

Wonderful writing Linaji…love it! :)

It is not an easy thing to expose inner personal feelings…...........
you have courage and spirit….....and a lovely wahini…........

I liked reading this. Thank you.
Karen

Very emotional and poignant! I am always a few days late in my viewing and so hope dear heart that you are back to feeling like the strong woman you are! Beautiful words used to express a sad sentiment!

heartfelt and poignant…such beautiful imagery and depth of emotions…wonderful writing…

linaji .. look above to Kumar’s posting … just wanted to let you know you commented rather than reply to him .. you might want to fix that so he can see your reply …. you can delete this message too (grin)

there have been times when as lonely as you felt I also … just know that I love you sweet sister and that your friends love you too (big smile)

I’m becoming a huge fan of yours.one can’t help but feel what you are feeling as you write,I don’t think it gets much than that.A truly amazing talent you have been gifted with. You da girl!!!(smile)

OMG I know how you feel!

you know, this took me back to the feelings i got when i first read Anne Sexton… she’s one hell of a writer and will always be one of those women i would’ve loved to meet… her poetry is so open and raw and there, and you have that same gift of drawing me in with your real-ness (is that a word?)... deep stuff, Lina… deep

Your poem is on its way…..later