Where Ya Been Hal?

linaji
Author: linaji
Word Count: 261
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Where Ya Been Hal?

I needed to laugh.. so I wrote this and made my self FEEL the smile I have desired all day!!


WITH THIS PIECE IN MIND I HAD ALREADY CREATED THIS WORK.. PART OF MY SERIES CALLED.. ELEVATOR INSTRUCTONS FOR LIFE....

Where Ya Been Hal? belongs to the following groups:

Core [C.O.R.E], Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY) and Up & Coming Writers

What is endless as I peer into the crystal ball?
Where you been Hal?
Where are your torn socks from last life’s romp?
Did you see the Ivory Coast yet??
Did you taste that dish of ice cream from Peru?
With berries that cure cancer
But ohh what to do?
Berries gone soon they say
By the fires for fields of soy beans
And Corn Fuel and still some sugar cane.

This time round Hal you better get there soon.

Loving you lifetimes?
This seems so abrupt and surreal
Like a meter out of whack
Or a singer whose cut no less
Not hitting that high C
A fly hit her throat
What Luck!
That’s what she said to me.

Just letting you know friend
The world keeps moving on
No different from before
When you used to call me ‘mom’
Oh I know I was 65 and you were older still
But calling me a name like that
Truly made me ill!!

Hold me close and tell me how much
You adore
Me and my long silky locks
Teaching me to connect the dots
And smear the patterns that I lost
Inside your life and wishes and your
Begging me for more?
Yep I remember you doing all that
Just like the life before..

It’s about patterns for me now dear
And indigo blue
I feel a temptation to let you know
What I am to do.. as I walk and I strut
And I feel your lazy hummm
My life this time is glorious
So find another mum!!

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais

    Amber Elizabet...

    Lol I am always so glad to saee you smile love ya linaji xx

  • linaji replied

    Lolo!! thanks so much Amber.. feels kinda good!!

  • Erhan OZBIYIK

    Erhan OZBIYIK

    ROFL !!!!

  • linaji replied

    I just got up off the floor!!! smiles and hugs.. tee hee..

  • ufosIsee

    ufosIsee

    That was real good and to cute…. Easy to relate to… LOL

  • linaji replied

    Yah…. you know friend.. sometimes.. we just gotta be easy.. been wrapped in a time warp of this work and holed up and feeling so possessive of my creations.. I had to take a breath and let go of the damn serious stuff.. Laughing is the key!! xox

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    Hey gorgeous, made me smile to xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • linaji replied

    tee hee.. Carlotta.. I jjust had to surrender to a good laugh!

  • dpennyor

    dpennyor

    LOL!!!!! love that sweet smile my dear!!!!

  • linaji replied

    lolol I am so glad your around Dennis!! sending you hugs!

  • CloudChaser

    CloudChaser

    well this just made me smile like a Cheshire cat….. ( a real smile) xx

  • linaji replied

    tee hee.. thanks so much CC..you actually a big inspiration for my getting the pen out.. sure helps the feelings.. no?? smile..xox

  • Erhan OZBIYIK

    Erhan OZBIYIK

    I didnt sleep :))
    And will not.. Will make my breakfast and in 2 hrs, thinkin to move out :)))

  • linaji replied

    What!!?? move where ErhaN???

  • dpennyor

    dpennyor

    awwww, thanks for the hugs babe!!! love them

  • linaji replied

    Nice evening Hugs.. it is late and I am going to run out of some filters.. boo hoo..so I am trying to his some of my works with them.. up late I think!

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais

    Amber Elizabet...

    hey been working on that gratitude piece for us let you know when I finish very excited hugssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss and xx to my sis lil me xx and Smiles always feel Good xxx

  • linaji replied

    Yes you are full of warm waves sweet sis.. thanks so much.. need a sweet amber smile today.. too..xoxox

  • Erhan OZBIYIK

    Erhan OZBIYIK

    I mean be back at eve lol :)))

  • linaji replied

    Ohhh Lolol@!!!! be safe!

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais

    Amber Elizabet...

    will do heregoes a Linaji smile xx check it out xx

  • owlspook

    owlspook

    LOL …

  • linaji replied

    smiles…. back friend.. a hoot really@!

  • dpennyor

    dpennyor

    awwww, need some company??? I’ll stay up with you…LOL

  • linaji replied

    yahhh.. been a rough one today… just a bit wanting to be selfish.. and wanting attention and love.. but look.. no one around!! just me an me art1 lolol

  • dpennyor

    dpennyor

    awwwww, I’ll give you love babe!!!!!! smoooooooch… hugzzzzzzzzzzz

  • linaji replied

    ohhhh how did I miss this.. for 28 minuets this has been waiting for me!! lolo I am almost to bed.. you are so ..just the best!! kiss and Hug.. and goodnight almost my darling Dennis!

  • valzart

    valzart

    Aww enraptured with this heartfelt writing sweetheART ;} happy hugglez

  • cloudsdreams

    cloudsdreams

    prose cast in laughter sad an irony of how you made this funny. i laugh with you my friend.. Mr Mabe my cat woke me to be fed…how delightful to see a laugh in satire. wonderful linaji…luv ya so janet

  • helene ruiz

    helene ruiz

    love this!

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Delightful poetry Linaji!! :>)

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