GREY TRUTHS

linaji
Author: linaji
Word Count: 72
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GREY TRUTHS

TOTALLY INSPIRED THE MINUET I OPENED UP ARLETTA’S WORK
Shades Of Grey Reborn

Grey penetrating truth,
hair twisted and skewed
from hours spent,
in our passions cry,
Why?
Grey?
You?
Mists
Subtle lessons,
far away this seems so solid,
but the closer I come to knowing
You,
Grey,
Glue
Stuck in what seems the next thing to do

We sip our coffee,
you look at your watch
I know soon the taxi will arrive,

And the mists will not survive
Lifted

You
Grey
Gone.
Gone.

  • valzart

    valzart

    It’s a beautiful poem for Arletta’s beautiful work sweetheART ;} hugglez

  • linaji replied

    Sweet wonderful sexy Val… thank you!

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    I really like this…...........

  • linaji replied

    That’s cuz you are as deep and as kind as the sky and all it’s variables.

  • TeriLee

    TeriLee

    wow…deep….one of your best! xo :)

  • linaji replied

    I want pink hippos.. and yah.. this is fast feeling.. but seems to work that way for me.. just feeling..

  • kjgordon

    kjgordon

    blush

  • robpixaday

    robpixaday

    Powerful….....wow…..............

  • Sensiworld

    Sensiworld

    Just beautiful Lina !!
    And works perfectly with Arletta’s art !

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    wonderful written piece,dawnx

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    wonderful writing, so evocative! I love it when your eyes see an image and the veil lifts and the words flow…....from that place far beyond reason, even beyond feeling…...but a place that is a part of us and yet not of us…..

  • ellamental

    ellamental

    Fandamntastic!!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    OMG, Amazing collaboration…absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!! Love & Hugs, Sally xxxxxooooo

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    an amazing collaboration lina, those words pierce the ole heart ;)

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Very fine collaboration! Oh for the moment of pure ecstasy, where there is no doubt to the bliss, and it needs no extra feeding on our part, but simply lasts for sheer brilliance of its own!

  • Arletta

    Arletta

    Well, well, well .. you know I had to favorite this. lol Thank you for the bits that involve me being plugged and/or complimented; and, thank you, some more, for the wonderful poem.

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