The color of his eyes remained in her heart,
Green almost,
The color of grass,
Lovemaking
Surges of promise after the sigh
Dreams
The day he came to her,
She was hundreds of miles away,
Him,
Smiling like always
And promising her eternal love,
Then,
She
Returning to their meeting place,
A stranger whom she knew enough
Eyes steadied on her gait
Crossed her path and stopped
All at once,
She knew
He was gone,
Eyes the color of grass
Lust
Love
Him,
The one who took all her sighs
And turned them into butterflies
Transforming her negligence and
Self-forgetting
Into the steps she alone could take,
He was gone,
And this stranger held her shoulders,
And heard her foul pain
He allowed for the tears
To stain
His embrace,
Then all at once she was
On the grass where they used to lay,
His eyes
All that she remembered,
All that she could see,
Heart,
Exploded into a thousand pieces
Of pain
Of misery
Him,
Beside her then,
Smiling like a blanket of Joy,
A flute song
A lover’s gift
Given at sunset,
The promise again,
Eyes,
The color of
Grass
The color of her memories
And now
The color of Eternal Love.
Erhan OZBIYIK
Wow !!! Thats great Lina !!!!!!!!
linaji replied
Glad ..Erhan.. you are my sunrise!!!
Visual Inspi...
beautiully written
linaji replied
Much thanks Rhonda.. feel the spirit of one I loved last night.. xox
Al Neaimi
just wonderful both the poem and the image. well done Lina.
linaji replied
Again… you fill my heart with a sweet joy this morning.. Much love to you and …what have you been up to? Shall drop by this morning… xox
dawndavies
wow awesome linaji, well done,dawnx
linaji replied
Dawnie!! thanks so very very much!! btw.. your tee is simply stunning!
Judi Taylor
Written from within a loving and beautiful soul. Yes, he has/had green eyes. How did you know? :)
linaji replied
tee hee.. it is strange.. I worked on this piece for quite sometime and did not know if i was finished.. then I wrote.. and knew I was done..xox
dpennyor
WOW!!! super words, such a fantastic talent my friend!!!!
linaji replied
Dennis.. you are such a romantic wonder.. I am so happy you faved too!! sending you big..((HUG))!
Visual Inspi...
Praise God!!
Madeline M Allen
BRAVO !!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful artwork & verse my dear Chicky. hugs xxx
linaji replied
Thank you for your love Maddy.. xox appreciate the last bm!
C J Lewis
Wonderful writing of wonderful experience and fabulous art work Lina :)
linaji replied
CJ! thank you so much!! Art comes from supreme feeling.. does it not?!
nkbellani
sssssssupaahb….
linaji replied
your a nut!! and I love it.. like that work..will use it!
devotee1
Very beautful writing, Lina. It is all perfect!
“Him,
Beside her then,
Smiling like a blanket of Joy,
A flute song
A lover’s gift
Given at sunset,” Love this!
Great artwork as well!
linaji replied
Wonderful morning with you Joe.. appreciate your view and words..xox
linaji replied
PS.. thank you so much Joe for the fav!
TeriLee
Fantastically touching!!! You knew the image was done, because the words were ready to come out…that is exactly what I do with most of my patterns! This is such a wonderful poem….I had to read it out loud a couple times….would make a beautiful song set to music…
xoxoxox
linaji replied
I am all like …she does not get notices anymore..so I gotta tell her..forgot ADAWG.. did I give this image to? Will talk soon I hope… xox
linaji replied
Oh TL.. your the guage.. if you read it more than once I know I have done my job.. thanks for all the time this morning friend.. there is hope today.. much love.. me.
C J Lewis
Ah yes…and the love the supreme feeling evokes and embeds within that you bring to the without through the creativity it embraces you with my lovely friend :) CJ xoxo
dpennyor
awww, you have a little romantic in you too I see.. very, very special my dear!!
David Clark
really very touching Linaji – great depth to the words – hurt is universal
- the image is striking and so well matches the words -congrats on knowing that it was finished—davelinaji replied
Thank you so much David.. this has been a whirling two days!! xox
Sensiworld
Wow, beautifully written Lina !! x
linaji replied
You truly made my morning dear one.. you must have felt my tender heart.. I woke up from a dream about him.. thank you again for your wonderful you and I appreciate the purchase.. I will put her on the front.. my sweet little flower!!
helene ruiz
nice!!
linaji replied
xox!!
navybrat
now this brings a tear to my eye!! bless ya Lina!
Jeff Palm Phot...
Wow..this is incredible!!! wonderful heartfelt words! xox
linaji replied
Straight from that beating mass my darling.!
tkrosevear
Truly emotive writing and art lina, words do not suffice ;)
linaji replied
Sweet friend.. thanks so much.. xox
Sensiworld
You are very welcome Lina !! xx
Have a great day !!
Jeff Palm Phot...
If you need someone to hold that with gentle hands..i may know of someone…...xoxox
Krisso
Linaji… Wow… This work has effected me greatly. I feel this, I truly do… I wish i could give you a big hug right now. I will be sending energy your way…
Thank you for sharing this.
xoxo
aspectsoftmk
after four times of reading i may be able to comment… and then again maybe not..
this has hit a spot..xoxxo i will come back and read and look again….it is exceptional in every aspect…
linaji replied
I just read it again.. and again.. .Love is like Love.. no matter here or there.. for the moment if one chooses they get to connect with the eternal…and what to find.. but Love.. you, my eternal friend are appreciated big heART.. look what you started.. this place is all about heART!! i never saw that untill you pointed it out to me…to many.. xox
kenspics
Very moving poem and incredible image linaji!!
The eyes are indeed the window to the soul!!
linaji replied
Hello friend KenS.. thanks so much.. really had quite a wonderful time feeling this into being.. xox
Angel Warda
So Beautiful!!!!
linaji replied
xoxo big :=D
Larasolnishko
humans, humans, humans…What we are doing to each other?
linaji replied
Loving…
Arletta
I am impressed, dearest
linaji replied
For me.. your words go straight to my heart!! xox
PJ Ryan
mmmm see. I knew i loved this image this morning when i first saw it … and now, i find it with a stunning piece of writing such as this ..
beautiful work lina xx
linaji replied
Nicole Ryan.. thank you.. your new icon shows a sweet shade of fun and smiles..
Appreciate YOU> xox
Sassafras
Listen…to me…Ms. Lina…you ROCK!,
This is awesome, heartgirl. Just awesome!
Love is always on the way…we just have to be ready to express it.
linaji replied
I am listening.. and your wonderful piece Sassi.. you Skinny dipping fool.. is on the front of my work… it was on the third page.. glad you pointed it out.. cause.. I got wonderful response. and I like that you are around… it feels good!
Ushna Sardar
lina its beautiful!!!!! love this!!!!
huggles xoxoxox
linaji replied
There you are!! I am behind.. as per usual.. your mail was bliss and I am so very very happy you are doing well my friend.. Love you lots.. and thanks for the view!
linaji replied
Ohh thank you for the fav!!!~ huggles and snuggles.. back!
Ushna Sardar
you are such a sweetheart lina! missed you massively my friend! huggles n love xxxxxxxx
linaji replied
Oh Ushna.. I have misssed you desperate for sure!! I went to your work and look and where is my darling Ushna.. then I miss the comment I seek!!! got your mail too.. thank you dear.. how are you? be well..xox Linaji
jcaputo
I am speechless. Simply beautiful. I love it.
Wendy Slee
totally amazing…... your words evoked such bittersweet feelings for me, you truly know how to write the core of the human condition yet illuminate it with true spiritual grace…...
Ushna Sardar
missed you too my dear friend lina! you are such a sweetheart, love you dear friend Mwahh. been busy so couldn’t keep in touch with redbubble but now trying to get some time and write some writing and post to RedBubble! you are lovely friend lina, thanks you so much for love and beautiful words! I’m always around my friend! much love and huggles! xoxoxoxoxoxox