This is no white river rafting;
our naked feet do not touch;
are not shod
on aged brown bamboo,
though I would have it so;
our fingers have not trickled to rest
in ridges too thin to bear the weight of burnt souls
oh hear the wind pour, hear the wind pour fantasia
the dark of my hand has not yet slid pastthe Crescent bow of your back, and
probably never will
feel the vibration fantasia,
feel it scamper up your bosom,
lodge at your throat
think of us, call my name…
listen for its return
this is no white river rafting:
though It be fresh on the mind;
I may not feel the tresses of dew damp hair
knit your warm cheek to my shallow water shoulder.
the riverman does not turn to narrate
the passage with a pole to the river bed,
does not sing us native love songs
of slaves and bucrramaster’s daughter;
they probably wouldn’t fit our story.
where are the full-moon silver- strands
fantasia
to embroider your stare?,
to call me to your lips?
when will your voice settle
and the wind pour no more?
when shall we forsake distance and time
when fantasia… shall I call you my own?
Comments
awwww this is.. Just amazing, i cant find the words to express exactly where this piece took me! You are such a beautiful soul. A beautiful writer with a gorgeous heart.. I love this Aj.
Jet! it means alot to me to see this! :)) I don’t know how to say thanks! but I am always glad to see your comments! you are so kind to me!
– lilAj
Great write AJ, a peak into you heart I think.
Thanks Tony, it was somewhat of a peak there :)
– lilAj
Just Amazing…the right word to feel the flow of thought..Grt.Man..:0))
thank you very much!
– lilAj
You got my interest here, right from the title! Beautiful poetry, Aj
Ron, thanks for the reads! I will have to return the favor soon, thanks for the comment too, I am very happy you liked it.
– lilAj
This is mind blowing good writing Jamaican brother..you make me want to close my eyes and drag my pen across the island and write the seeds that have sprouted in my being..excellent work.
bro your comment puts such a smile on my face! it means a lot, especially since you would be more familiar with these images than many others! thanks for reading and for commenting! bless.
– lilAj
exquisite write AJ. Words really don’t describe the images and feelings you conjure up!
smiles! I am very glad it had a good impact on you my friend– lilAj
A well written piece, longing and emotions
thank you much Paul! :)
– lilAj
your soul shines through Aj; flowing from the heart….something truly special!
oh, it makes me happy to read this! thank you very much :)
– lilAj
fantastic piece! i love it!
I am glad you do! thanks for the comment :))
– lilAj
What a fabulously bright and generous soul shines through your words, a tender, kind and loving heart…a poets delicate hand….combined created a piece of written paradise.
oh Lisa! i am delighted that you would say that :) thank you for stopping by and reading, it means much :)
– lilAj