I Want to Remember

lianne
Author: lianne
Word Count: 118
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I Want to Remember

I Want to Remember belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Two Beings Group and WMG

I want to remember
how it felt to love you -
the soaring anticipation
of the moment I would see
the sunrise in your eyes.
I want to remember
that I loved the way
your voice, as warm
as a soft summer evening
wrapped me in its embrace.
I want to remember
the way your smile
graced me with blessing
as delicate as moonlight,
as sparkling as stars.
I want to remember
that when I touched you
I felt suddenly one, whole,
a sense of the sacred,
enlightened, divine.
I want to remember
how I loved loving you
for love is an end unto itself,
loving is its own reward –
and I remember.

© Lianne Schneider September 2008

  • dpennyor

    dpennyor

    beautiful words, lovely job!!

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much Dennis – I appreciate your lovely comment.

  • jacqi

    jacqi

    Lianne, this is so beautiful

  • lianne replied

    Thanks jacqi – I’m so glad you liked it.

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    this is warm and wonderful my friend….......
    welcome back too! hugs~

  • lianne replied

    Thanks for the welcome Shiloh- I’ll never catch up to you! Happy that you liked this my friend!

  • butchart

    butchart

    such a beautiful lesson and one that needs to be remembered…...... thank you…. the purity of loving is indeed it’s own reward… nothing else is necessary…......... elegant writing my dear and a powerful message…........... love….........b

  • lianne replied

    You’re right my darling man – it is. Thank you sweetheart for everything!! Mostly just for being wonderful you!

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    OMG, Lianne, this is one of the most beautiful pieces I have ever read…a definite fav…
    Hugs, Sally xxxxoooo

  • lianne replied

    Aww Sally thank you so much my friend. I’m delighted that you liked it.

  • LjMaxx

    LjMaxx

    Beautifully written lianne.. Well done again..

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much – I appreciate your lovely comment. That is very gracious of you Lj.

  • Erhan OZBIYIK

    Erhan OZBIYIK

    I gotto say one word sorry : “P E R F E C T” Lianne !!!

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much Erhan – I appreciate your lovely comment. That’s very sweet of you to say.

  • aspectsoftmk

    aspectsoftmk

    hi lianne..beautiful heart felt words my friend…

    for me i love remembering the whys of those i love….

  • lianne replied

    Thank you Terri – yes remembering is good, especially the positives! So appreciate you!

  • LindaR

    LindaR

    such truth and wisdom shining through your scripted verse ~ love is ~ is never really lost ~ it is a gift in the giving and that is something you will always have ~ because it comes from within…xxx

  • lianne replied

    No it’s not lost and that is some kind of blessing. Thank you so much my sweet friend – your own work today is the same kind of gift! You’re always in my heart too dear Linda. xox

  • jpryce

    jpryce

    Beautifully written and from the heart Lianne…what I’ve come to expect from you…and you always deliver…

  • lianne replied

    You’re far too generous with your praise Susie but I so thank you for it and I’m really so happy that you liked this.

  • saleire

    saleire

    From the heart Lianne…..totally from the heart as that is the only place true love can be felt and given without seeking reward…....and it never forgets, nor should it, love is the only thing on earth that helps us remember our divinity within. It’s beautiful sis …..like you xxxxxx

  • lianne replied

    Sis – you know how I feel about you especially – and that light, that divinity – it’s in you and all you do. Thank you for everything dearest Sis! You are an amazing woman!

  • Tina Hogg

    Tina Hogg

    Oh Lianne…. this has made me feel all gooey inside! (I know “gooey” isn’t poetic, but nevertheless it’s descriptive!!) Beautiful writing – as always xx

  • lianne replied

    I imagine that e e cummings would find “gooey” perfectly poetic and I certainly do too! And I’m very touched Tina – thank you!

  • hilarydougill

    hilarydougill

    beautifully well written sweetheart, and so very visual. hugsxxx

  • lianne replied

    Thank you sweetie – I’m so glad you think so. Always so appreciate you and your lovely comments. xox

  • Arie van der Wijst

    Arie van der W...

    These wonderful words will help you remember Lianne, from now on they will be in a lot of hearts, many souls can get comfort from your healing words dear friend. It shows the passion you have in your heart and soul! I’m sure you will remember! Love and hugs dear Lianne xxx

  • lianne replied

    I’m sure I will too Arie – and thank you for such a sweet and lovely comment my dear friend. You are always far too kind and generous.

  • devotee1

    devotee1

    Very beautiful! One of the loveliest poems I have ever read. And if in reality it is not to remember a certain individual, then the poem is to remember love, and by doing so to keep love alive in your heart for new experience. Brava!

  • lianne replied

    Joe, my dear friend – what a very lovely thing to say! Certainly we must keep love in our hearts always and open to all loving in this beautiful universe. Your comment means a great deal to me!

  • Jan Landers

    Jan Landers

    so beautifully written, lianne…..for me, a reminder to renew those feelings in my own relationships…...to remember…..

  • lianne replied

    Aww Jan, dear friend, thank you. That means so much to me!

  • Yool

    Yool

    Wonderful poem Lianne i love it!!!

  • lianne replied

    Thanks so much Mariola – such a lovely thing to say! I’m glad you liked it!

  • girlinthestars

    girlinthestars

    Lianne this is so perfectly put. I just love the gentleness of it, like a tide, rolling in and out with that soothing shore sound. this is the shore, in words.

  • lianne replied

    What a lovely and totally poetic comment Amy – and how wonderfully sweet of you to say! I’m just tremendously pleased that you liked it!

  • MaryK

    MaryK

    Wonderful as always… I felt your words.

  • lianne replied

    Thank you Mary – if you felt them then maybe I was successful. I so much appreciate your lovely comment.

  • Nanmarie

    Nanmarie

    You will always remember and never forget.

  • lianne replied

    You’re very astute Nancy – and only one who has loved selflessly could know that so well. Thank you for “getting it” – but then you always do, my friend.

  • greeneyedlady

    greeneyedlady

    for love is an end unto itself,
    loving is its own reward –
    and I remember

    even when love doesn’t work, we still have a right to remember what was good about it….if we want to…this is wonderful, lianne!

  • lianne replied

    Thanks so much Lisa – yes we have that right – in fact, it’s almost an obligation to remember the good, it’s what keeps us alive and believing in love. I’m so glad you liked it Lisa.

  • Bev Woodman

    Bev Woodman

    Lianne, I can tell this is from your heart by the beautiful words and flow of the poetry. I immersed myself within your words and loved every word – beautifully written by a beautiful lady for someone very special!

  • lianne replied

    Thank you from my heart Bev – yes, for someone very special indeed. I’m so very happy that you liked it!

  • linaji

    linaji

    So much grace and truth from a fine woman with heART and Soul.. I remember.

  • lianne replied

    Thank you my sweet friend – coming from one with so much heart and soul herself, that is high praise indeed. I’m glad you liked it Lina.

  • Bev Woodman

    Bev Woodman

    Thank you for sharing!!

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much Bev – I’m really glad you liked it!

  • Marion  Cullen

    Marion Cullen

    Once experienced, love itself is unforgettable…much like your poetry Lianne. A very emotive piece.

  • lianne replied

    Aww Marion – thank you so much my friend. I really so much appreciate your lovely comments – always.

  • amarica

    amarica

    Beautiful writing my friend, hugzzzzzzzzzzz

  • lianne replied

    Thanks Ann – you are always so supportive – I so appreciate it.

  • S Burns

    S Burns

    Your writing is quite soothing like a whisper on the wind.
    thanks

  • lianne replied

    Stanley what a perfectly lovely thing to say! Thank you so very much – I really appreciate it a great deal!

  • loramae

    loramae

    Oh Lianne…my heart to yours… Some things, no matter how long or how far…we never forget to remember… You touch me so…

  • lianne replied

    Ah Loramae – I’m so very glad this touched you. You are so right, we never forget. I know I’ve missed countless posts of yours, my friend, but there’s no way I can play catch up on everything after being off a few. I’ll try though – hate to miss anything you do as you have become a fabulous photographer in very short order!!!!!!! Thank you dear Loramae – you always make me feel as if what I write is worthwhile!!

  • Paul Compton

    Paul Compton

    Magic. This is truly gorgeous.

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much Paul – I’m very touched by your comment and I truly appreciate it a great deal!

  • PJ Ryan

    PJ Ryan

    so incredibly beautiful .. and so poignant for me tonight .. thank you xx

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much for such a lovely comment Nicole – I’m very glad it touched you in some way. I appreciate it very much!

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    Just look at this wonderful expression!!
    .....how we all want to remember these things…to take them and fold them into our very being, into every cell, because love is what this journey is all about. Thank you for writing it so beautifully…..

  • lianne replied

    Wendy I’m so honored by your visit and by your lovely comment – coming from someone whose own work so speaks to me and that I so admire. Thank you so very much!

  • LisaG

    LisaG

    Glad you remember…....love is not to be forgotten even when it is over….........

    Beautiful writing….

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much Lisa- no it’s never forgotten, is it? Nor should the best of it, the joy of just loving ever be forgotten. I’m so very glad you liked it and appreciate your thoughtful comment.

  • Holly Ringland

    Holly Ringland

    i want to remember how it felt to love you.

    what a perfect want.

  • lianne replied

    Thank you Holly – your comment on this means a great deal to me. I appreciate it so much.

  • Mariaan Krog

    Mariaan Krog

    Wonderful memories written so tenderly. Bravo, dear friend. I am so glad you are putting your emotions, feelings & memories into writing. Your healing process is so beautiful.

  • lianne replied

    Well thank you Mariaan – sometimes it’s just something we all have to remember. I suspect that even down the road, I’ll always write like this – it’s just a human thing. I so appreciate your lovely comments my dear friend.

  • beast

    beast

    beautiful piece lianne, memory is a bane but also a brilliant vice

  • lianne replied

    Thanks ever so much Luke – life would be pretty grim without the softer memories, wouldn’t it? And it never hurts to remember loving!

  • DottieDees

    DottieDees

    Your poem is so poignant and you can tell by all the responses how important the subject of love is…..thank you my dear!

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much Dottie – and I’m honored that you’ve added me to your watchlist! I hope the poem touched a chord for many because even when love doesn’t work it the way we planned, it’s worth remembering the best of it!

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    This brought tears to my eyes as I too remembered … thank you my dear! xox

  • lianne replied

    Those are the memories worth keeping though aren’t they? Even though sometimes they make us grieve the loss. Thank you sweet Jen – I’m touched by your comment.

  • Martie Venter

    Martie Venter

    Wow – beautiful and very moving writing, Lianne!

  • lianne replied

    Thank you so much Martie – I’m glad it touched you. It was a very special and personal piece for me. I appreciate your comment so much!

  • VelvetGirl

    VelvetGirl

    Beautiful Lianne. “loving is it’s own reward…..” and it is. x

  • lianne replied

    Yes, it is – that doesn’t mean we don’t wish to have our love returned but we can’t expect or demand that as a fair exchange for what we freely give and for what reward we get from the giving. I’m so glad you liked this Velvet – and I thank you for your lovely comment.

  • Jboo09

    Jboo09

    This one actually made my eyes well up with tears Lianne. I wish I could write like you. Your poetry inspires me and helps me not feel alone. Thank you thank you thank you!

  • lianne replied

    Oh Jenny we are never really alone – or as that line in P.S. I Love You says – we are alone together! What a lovely and generous thing to say, my friend. And you write every bit as movingly and inspiringly and I’m looking forward to seeing it soon! Thank you!

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    This has touched me and reminded me that remembering, however painful it may be at times, is sacred and neccesary.

  • lianne replied

    Yes it can be terribly painful, especially if we are still feeling the loss of such love – but, it also helps us to remember the joy, what we learned about loving another just because… Thank you so much Cathrine – I’m touched and honored by your comment and your favoriting this work (which just happens to be my own personal favorite as well).

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    I recently wrote something about remembering too, although it is more on the sad side. Your work brings light to remembering. You are most welcome. You write beautifully

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