I Couldn't Have Loved You More

I know that you were not there
When I took my first step
I know you never heard me
when I cryed myself to sleep
I’ve never come to understand
Why you were never with me
To raise me high upon your shoulders
To pull a leaf from high from a tree
We’ve never walked hand in hand
Or gathered seashells from a shore
But i’ve learned down through the years
I could’nt have loved you more

I wonder where are you now
Are you far out to sea
Has your heart ever been broken
Have you ever thought of me
Where are you now
Are you a rich man or poor
Don’t you know it dosen’t matter
Because I could’nt have loved you more

On that special day
When friends had fathers to share
I’d find some place to be alone
And pretend that you were there
Just sit and think of some things
That you might have had to tell
Then i’d buy you the perfect card
Slip it in the mail
I guess they’re still there—- Somewhere
Packed away, Forgotten — all 44
Each addressed " To Dad" and simply signed
“I couldn’t have loved you more”


Leo  Head

I Couldn't Have Loved You More by

This is an homage to my father and to things may have been. The last time I actually saw him, I was told, was when I was almost two.

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  • Kevin  Kroeker
    Kevin Kroekerover 3 years ago

    Leo this is so very powerful and full of emotion. Beautifully written. I could read this a hundred times and each time my heart sheds a tear. Powerful!!!!!

  • Xandru
    Xandruover 3 years ago

    So emotional I could hardly read to the end. Well Written!!

  • Leo  Head
    Leo Headover 3 years ago

    Thanks
    Leo

  • sorry for the delay in replying……just discovered the reply option (old dog, new tricks)

    Really appreciate your kind comments.

    LEO

    – Leo Head

  • Leo  Head
    Leo Headover 3 years ago

    Thanks Kevin for the favoriting……………hope to be able to get around in the bubble a little.

    Leo
  • Dayonda
    Dayondaover 3 years ago

    Wow, this is fantastic! This needs to be trotted out for all the Fathers Day celebrations- US, Australia, it’s really beautiful.

  • Dayonda
    Dayondaover 3 years ago

    Congratulations, Leo! Your poem “I couldn’t have loved you more” has been Featured in Mornings & Evenings - Sunbeams & Storms. You write as well as you photograph!

  • Leo  Head
    Leo Headover 3 years ago

    I really don’t know what to say………Thanks again for reading, enjoying, and another feature W.O.W. .. and a big thanks for all of your wonderfull comments. I actually wasn’t going to add it but am glad I did

  • Rosy Kueng
    Rosy Kuengover 3 years ago

    Congratulations!!! I could hardly read it to the end…it touched me a lot! So emotional, powerful and touching…good thing you added it :o)) Enjoy this feature and cheers with a glass of wine…

  • Sorry for the long delay in replying …..just discovered the reply option, ooooops. was using the comment feature for my replys.( old dog, new tricks ha, ha.

    Thanks for your kind comments…
    my appologies again

    Leo

    – Leo Head

  • Isa Rodriguez
    Isa Rodriguezover 3 years ago

    so moving.. wonderful words from the heart.

  • my appologies for the delay in replying ( technical dificulties on my part….it’s the old dog, new trick syndrom i guess)

    thanks for your kind words.
    LEO

    – Leo Head

  • Dottie Palmer
    Dottie Palmerover 3 years ago

    Great piece, Leo! Very moving.