I know that you were not there
When I took my first step
I know you never heard me
when I cryed myself to sleep
I’ve never come to understand
Why you were never with me
To raise me high upon your shoulders
To pull a leaf from high from a tree
We’ve never walked hand in hand
Or gathered seashells from a shore
But i’ve learned down through the years
I could’nt have loved you more
I wonder where are you now
Are you far out to sea
Has your heart ever been broken
Have you ever thought of me
Where are you now
Are you a rich man or poor
Don’t you know it dosen’t matter
Because I could’nt have loved you more
On that special day
When friends had fathers to share
I’d find some place to be alone
And pretend that you were there
Just sit and think of some things
That you might have had to tell
Then i’d buy you the perfect card
Slip it in the mail
I guess they’re still there—- Somewhere
Packed away, Forgotten — all 44
Each addressed " To Dad" and simply signed
“I couldn’t have loved you more”
Comments
Leo this is so very powerful and full of emotion. Beautifully written. I could read this a hundred times and each time my heart sheds a tear. Powerful!!!!!
So emotional I could hardly read to the end. Well Written!!
Thanks
Leo
sorry for the delay in replying……just discovered the reply option (old dog, new tricks)
Really appreciate your kind comments.
LEO
– Leo Head
Thanks Kevin for the favoriting……………hope to be able to get around in the bubble a little.
LeoWow, this is fantastic! This needs to be trotted out for all the Fathers Day celebrations- US, Australia, it’s really beautiful.
Congratulations, Leo! Your poem “I couldn’t have loved you more” has been Featured in Mornings & Evenings
-Sunbeams & Storms. You write as well as you photograph!I really don’t know what to say………Thanks again for reading, enjoying, and another feature W.O.W. .. and a big thanks for all of your wonderfull comments. I actually wasn’t going to add it but am glad I did
Congratulations!!! I could hardly read it to the end…it touched me a lot! So emotional, powerful and touching…good thing you added it :o)) Enjoy this feature and cheers with a glass of wine…
Sorry for the long delay in replying …..just discovered the reply option, ooooops. was using the comment feature for my replys.( old dog, new tricks ha, ha.
Thanks for your kind comments…
my appologies again
Leo
– Leo Head
so moving.. wonderful words from the heart.
my appologies for the delay in replying ( technical dificulties on my part….it’s the old dog, new trick syndrom i guess)
thanks for your kind words.
LEO
– Leo Head
Great piece, Leo! Very moving.