~PARADISE FOUND~
This is a story which was inspired by the actual spirit of the waves which I felt in my heart as they triggered powerful emotions deep inside of me. I have also always adored/been in love with the water. I’ve been so blessed as having had many opportunity to enjoy the leisure & sport of swimming. I am thankful to my heavenly father above for each & every swim I have ever had. Each time I enter the water is new & exciting & is so special to me. I did not plan to write this story…it was delivered to me in my mind. I hope you enjoy the orchestration performed by the emotions from deep inside my being, my spirit, my heart. I give credit to th Lord above for each & every breath…each & every word I have been able to write to give to you.
Leilani Melayna Harris
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I awaken to the beautiful sound of waves crashing onto the shoreline….
One by one they dance right in, only to whirl around_and then without even saying goodbye (except for showing me huge foamy bubbles, millions of them, all at once too many, therefore impossible to count!!!) They one by one roll one by one roll away again since they’ve been called back out to active duty as soon as they’ve had their own little “debut” on shore. This for each wave is the chance of a lifetime, honey!
That’s when I saw Him for the first time. My “Goodbye…I’m going to miss you….it was so nice meeting you….you were real special & thanks so much for giving me a chance to enjoy your little dance….is only drowned out by more waves, different waves….YET not the same wave I first saw & fell in love with! All I have left are fading memories of His little dance….
“But wait”, I shout. “Wait for me!” “My prince!”, I added. “Give me a chance to show my love for You! ” “Give me another chance….I beg of you, to prove I can DANCE with you!” “Oh, my soul is in anguish….as in my heart I’m crying a million tears all at once!” A beautiful symphony of tears….each tear, triggered by my gun of emotions is painstakingly playing a different instrument in such a melancholy, busting at the seams effort/tune to release the pent up emotion that’s been hold up deep within the lonely abyss of my heart. My inner voice can barely muster up enough energy to say….with words steadily fainting….”Please, my friend,,,,please come back….I want you so badly….I want to see you again….I want to hold you in my arms one more time….if I ever get another chance with you….I will join you, my friend….”
“Just let me be with you….take me out to sea with you! So that I might have a chance of a lifetime to prove my love for you is beautiful, is strong, is brave, is courageous, is worthy, is REAL!”
I shout & squeal
I shout & squeal
It’s You, My Love!
Oh, the ecstasy….
Oh, how I feel….
Now, that I’m a mermaid & my neptune is back….I FEEL SO REAL!
oneperfectkiss
Very special. Lovely indeed! xx
LeilaniMelayna replied
I thank you very kindly, oneperfectkiss!
Smiles Leilani
webbie
Awsome love of the sea…And how you can escape real life just in a beautiful wave,,,,Great Job My Friend:) hugggggz
LeilaniMelayna
Thank you so very much, oneprefectkiss for adding this one to your favorites!
Smiles Leilani
LeilaniMelayna
Awe, webbie…I’m REALLY blushing now! Gees thanks so much, my beautiful friend! Thanks also for adding this one to your favorites, my friend!
Smiles Leilani
LeilaniMelayna
Thanks also to Gabby who favorited this one, Paradise Found! Thanks also, Gabby for your lovely comment!
Smiles Leilani
Shoaib .
beautiful work !
LeilaniMelayna replied
Thanks so much, Shoaib!
Smiles Leilani
Christie Moses
Beautiful writing and so VIVID! You poured your emotions out on the page and that makes good poetry. :) Love C xo
LeilaniMelayna replied
Thanks so much for inspiring me, Christy…that’s a REAL compliment coming from you. I really hope to write several children’s book which conatins morals & virtues before I die! It is just one of my personal goals! I have some really neat ideas up my sleeve, honey! I really poured out my emotions in this piece…it matched the weather. At the time I wrote it I was on the 3rd floor of our condo we rented at the beach…it was overcast & I literally felt thrown into writing this piece. It was real early because of the daylight &there were no outside interruptions. All I had to focus on was the slamming of the waves & my inner thoughts!
Smiles Leilani
OWLGIRL69
I too love to swim and feel a strong affinity with water. The sea is a special place for me as we scattered my Dad’s ashes into the ocean.
LeilaniMelayna replied
I am sorry to hear of your loss, my friend. We have the swimming in common….the delightful mermaid connection! If I died in the water….it really wouldn’t be so bad. Everyone knows I love it there & I’m usually there anyway! Leilani’s Mermaid Paradise! Cheers!
Smiles Leilani
AngelMay
Beautiful writing, Leilani!
LeilaniMelayna replied
Thank so much, AngelMay for such a sweet comment!
Smiles Leilani
Del Millar
I love your tumble of emotion in this, Leilani, of the beautiful name,
and the joy, full of life and love.
LeilaniMelayna replied
Thank you very much, Del Millar for your thoughtfulness & kind words you have shared with me after viewing my work. I appreciate your time very much, my friend!
Smiles Leilani
Trenchtownrock
That is a wonderful piece…well done.
wingsoffire
Beautiful and magical writing with an outpour of emotion that has to come from a place so deep, that’s when the best pieces of art are created.
LeilaniMelayna replied
AMEN SISTER !!!!
Smiles Leilani
Solomon Walker
very lovely and romantic poetry, Leilani