The Immediate - Part one

Leia
Author: Leia
Word Count: 185
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The Immediate - Part one

I look into my own eyes.
How long had I been at the basin? I struggle to remember why I’m even there.
I make myself decide that it doesn’t matter.
The wheels start turning and I’m kicked into motion. My unconscious mind is running this program, void of any deliberate intention.
I lock the front gate. I don’t remember walking to it. The crude smell of burnt coffee pollutes my nostrils. The clouds look heavy again. Again? When was the last time I observed the clouds? Is my head that empty? I wish.
The wind swindles my breath, and by the time it returns, I’ve lost my will to scream.
Last night’s dreams invade my thoughts.
Following futile protest, one of my front teeth was being extracted to donate to someone who needed it more. During the operation, my blood was being drained – but only so that I was too weak to escape the imminent flood that would kill many, caused by the explosion of a large ticking cartoon style time bomb.
That’s some messed up shit.
tbc….

  • Jessica  Tremp

    Jessica Tremp

    that really is…seems i’m not the only one dreaming vividly

  • Michael Alesich

    Michael Alesich

    Keep writing, some of us only get back to a computer recently.

    Very vivd dream. I can see the cartoon style bomb in my mind.

  • transmute

    transmute

    Darkly vivid Leia, and intriguing

  • Judi Corrigan

    Judi Corrigan

    Leia…when is part two coming???? I wait with bated breath

  • Damian

    Damian

    It’s an interesting style Leia, and I think it really suits the subject. I thought it was cool :)

  • MissKristy

    MissKristy

    Geez…how’d I miss this? Next time you post some writing you need to nag me to go look for it. I love this. Off to read part 2 now..

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