In A Perfect world

LBstillwaters
Author: LBstillwaters
Word Count: 280
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In A Perfect world

A Poem by LBstillwaters

In a perfect world your woman will be beautiful,
and only have eyes for you.
And whenever she looks into yours, she will never lie to you.
No matter the debt you will always be paid back.
Your friends will not betray you, because they’ll honor “you go way back”.
Everyone would have their mother’s love and father’s protection.
They would feel their brother’s hug, and sister’s affection.
A family’s bond would never be broken,
Since everyone’s heart would forever be open.
The words “jealousy” and “envy” would be mythical like unicorn,
Instead of it’s everyday wear like a pittiful uniform.
People wouldn’t gossip and stare, but care about everyone’s feelings.
You wouldn’t need hospital care, because you wouldn’t need healing.
People wouldn’t even know what blood is,
But everyone would show what love is!
To his woman, no man would ever be unfaithful.
In no land will there be anyone who is ungreatful.
Everything you ate would be seasoned to perfection.
There would be no such thing as “hate,” for the reason of perfection.
Nobody would change or age past twenty – one.
There will only be fresh air everyday, and plenty of sun.
Every kiss from your mate would feel like your first one!
On every list you could make there would be no “worst one”.
Everyone would have a home half the size of a mansion.
But the room to make it whole, with land the size for expansion.
Nobody would be lonely, and nobody would be greedy.
Nobody would be phony, and nobody would be needy.
Everybody will be “Happy”........In A Perect World

  • gudmike

    gudmike

    yep, bout sum’s it up m8 :)

  • gudmike

    gudmike

    oh….and ofc :(

  • erinfrank

    erinfrank

    I really would love to live in this perfect world:
    The words “jealousy” and “envy” would be mythical like unicorn,
    Instead of it’s everyday wear like a pittiful uniform.

  • sally-ann rawlinson

    sally-ann rawl...

    brilliant piece of writing,,,,
    shame the world isn’t perfect
    xx

  • rateotu

    rateotu

    “On every list you could make there would be no “worst one”’..like this idea. I always hate those applications on facebook about listing all your supposed friends in order of coolness or hotness or niceness or beautifulness. ugh what is up with that! one thing though (sorry, just thought you might want to know) ‘ungreatful’ should be ungrateful

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