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'Soon'

Three weeks of light to break me in, and now I’m set apart.
Although Black Friday’s canopy, has swept in wide and low;
morale is high and spirit’s strong, as I embrace the new.

The crows were waiting when I came, sent here bearing news;
that exiles’ end has come and gone, and now it’s time for truth.

To claim the life that was ordained, to see the story through.
Burn like the daytimes’ midnight star, and rise inside anew.

The missing shard that makes me whole shall soon be mine, for all;
empowerment that it grants me, will serve the greater good.

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Written whilst listening to, and named in honour of; the amazing My Bloody Valentine track of the same name.

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heir, creative writing, poetry, soon, anticipation, foresight, wisdom, light, space, time, reincarnation, karma, journey, black, friday, storm, morale, spirit, high, strong, truth, life, story, midnight, star, rise above, ascendancy, aspiration, shard, empowerment, greater good

I’m a Graphic Designer and aspiring Writer from Nelson, New Zealand, currently living in Sydney, Australia. I am passionate, energetic and driven. My work tends to focus on the expression of my energy, and the perception of the energies I feel, see in the light, the situations and the people around me.

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Comments

  • Zambini3
    Zambini3over 5 years ago

    Very evocative piece!

  • Samuel Vega
    Samuel Vegaover 5 years ago

    Interesting… has religious references, but not sure this is about a religious experience; at least not entirely. More like self healing, and self empowerment … I like it

  • ramya kapula
    ramya kapulaover 5 years ago

    beautiful

  • Laszlo Totka
    Laszlo Totkaover 5 years ago

    Thanks guys! Yeah I am a very spiritual person, so there is definitely that element present, and self healing is dead on the mark. I’ve just moved to Perth Australia, from my home in Nelson, New Zealand – in order to ‘start again’ but also to follow a path that I strayed from some years before. It means a lot for you guys to comment like this, thank you very much.

  • ellawiski
    ellawiskiover 5 years ago

    yay, perth! me too! its so weird when you come across people on the internet that live really near, kind of makes you remember that the gigantic sphere of web interaction is actually just normal people in normal places.
    aaaanyway,
    nice writing :)

  • Narcissus17
    Narcissus17over 5 years ago

    written with some soul; excellent.

  • skinnyman
    skinnymanover 5 years ago

    hi. Interesting piece. There are spiritual elements, a sense of a fullfillment yet to come. I am new to reb bubble and didn’t really expect to see writing of this sort. Ultimately a positive feeling comes through.

  • pillipala
    pillipalaabout 5 years ago

    cool piece

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