Give me your heart
Give me your hand so I may travel towards you in safety
For without you I am lost
Give me your soul so I may feel your passion
For without you I am lifeless
Give me your company so I may breathe your presence
For without you I am empty
Give me your heart so I may bask in your love
For without you I am nothing
Comments
These words are beautiful. So much love…so many emotions.
A very beautiful and sensitive piece………soo well done..thank you..
Thanks Pagly2, It is always great to get feedback on my work, and it is appreciated.
– Larry Varley
This is incredibly lovely and heartfelt. Well written – great form. Very well done.
Touching Words….
Give me your soul so I may feel your passion
For without you I am lifeless
heartfelt and touching! Love this piece Larry.
beautiful works
hmmm….just beautiful. :-)
It is a poem that can be used as a wedding song. Touching and well written.
I really feel the love in this poem…..nicely done.
Thanks, yes this is an important work to me.
– Larry Varley
beautifully intimate work………..c