Once Upon A Time
Just a little poem…I got bored and felt like writing about being independent lol
Once Upon A Time belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, The Healing Journey and WMGonce upon a time
there was an independent girl
who could handle almost anything
in this crazy world
But unfortunately this girl
met a wealthy man
He stole her independent heart
and ruined all her plans
He took complete control
it was deminishing her health
She started to believe in him
and a whole lot less in herself
Then one day she realized
that all the storybooks lie
Cause once upon a time
doesn’t end with you and I
Leda D
good piece :)
JRGarland
Great piece. I love the humor in there about the story books lying. It made me smile. Well done.
LTScribble
omg..i just had a discussion with a friend on a simular topic…..at the end of the conversation….frustrated…...i said,
“I knew a man who bent a woman to his will”
“and wasn’t satisfied, until she broke”
he didn’t get it….but i bet..u do :0) love the poem story