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Kill for Life

Kill me and I might live

Spare me and I’ll be dead within seconds of your hesitation.
In order to hold on,
you have to let go To be able to be true.
Recall the memories that bring your soul a smile
And that should comfort you in my absence.
As this may
I allow it to be my suicide note.

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i wrote this while my chem teacher wasn’t really teaching and i had free time, so yah.

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life, death, truth, kill, hesitation, suicidal

Comments

  • Taft  Sowder
    Taft Sowderover 4 years ago

    This is quite strong, so many people view death as the end of it all, but I merely view it as the start of something new. Of course, there is a spiritual side to dying so that one might live, some religions would encourage one to die to the world around them and to die to the old ways of life so that they might live a more fulfilling life. It was a good read, but don’t get caught writing like that in school LOL.

  • hahah, yah a lot of people who read this to just to read were like, wth ! but sometimes i just write more heavy poems than just writing about flowers and sun. yah there are many views and opinions to the idea of dying and death, for me it similar to yours to how death can be the start of something different and not necessarily the end. i don’t think there is a finish to anything, something usually carries on whether its the whole or not…. haha .. thank you for commenting =]

    – LadyInSilver

  • ella b
    ella bover 4 years ago

    wow

  • a good wow?

    – LadyInSilver

  • ella b
    ella bover 4 years ago

    oh yes, an EXTREMELY good wow :)
    just incredibly written, i love it :)

  • thank you soo much!

    – LadyInSilver

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