She waits no more
One possible ending for “She Waits”
Written with the images Damian took earlier this week…And a little help from the man himself…..Thank you…
A role change for us both!
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Her intense gaze that melted many men’s hearts
Was only ever meant for one
She knew deep in her heart
He would never come
Still
She waited.
Her innocence was taken
That fateful day
All spells broken
Goodness seeped away
The sweetness that had been her star
Vanished as she witnessed
Her lovers cruel fate.
Hidden among the trees
She clutched the branches
To steady her feet
As he lay dying
Surrounded by the enemy
When darkness crept slowly in
She dropped to her feet
And went to him
Tears welled in her eyes
As she gently kissed
Her lover goodbye
Grasping his sword
In her delicate hand
A promise she did make
To never rest
Till she sealed
His murderer’s fate
Cleaning the blade
Of her lovers blood
She sealed her promise
With a kiss on the cool steel
Eyes lowered under her hood
Her elfish innocence evaporated
In a mist of mourning
Transforming from elf
To warrior Queen
She stood defiant
Suddenly dark and cruel
Grasping her sword
Marking her ground
She grew to be feared
by all those around
She grew in stature
Immortalised in song
When last blood
Had finally been claimed
She calmly turned the blade on herself
and as it pierced her darkened heart
She felt her lovers touch
Guiding her to him
It was not meant to be
The darkness claimed
What had been light
Her soul drifted
Never to be free
from the torment she suffered
and came to be
The dark warrior queen…..
Lisa Jewell
WOW…..........................this is stunning…..
Damian
Cool, great to see it up Kym!
Karen Cougan
omg….........xkc
Trish Cooper
Absolutely hands down the best poem you have ever written my friend!!!!!Incredible work….Trisha:))))))
Kym Breeze
Hi LisaG, thank you
Damian thanks for your help…still working on the links…sorry…lol
Karen thank you….
Trish…you are too kind….thank you, this came about very quickly, with a few helpful suggestions from Damian….appreciate your comments…thank you and hugs…to all
Dave Moilanen
Wonderful Kym!
Kym Breeze
Dave thank you for taking time to visit…appreciate it…Cheers
brummieboy
Magnificent … brilliant imagery …..
BarryKing
Wow ! this is amazing
I’m blown away by this Kym
Awesome writing
hugs
Bear
xx
Kym Breeze
BB thank you, writing to match images was fun, I had the whole pictue in my head and well it flowed…glad it is working for you guys as well.
Bear…grrrrr…..thank you….hope you’ve have been blown to far from home…..lol…...gald you enjoyed…...hugs
demon
Super writing Kym…applauds
Kym Breeze
demon thank you….nice to get some feedback…writing has been my thing for years yet never did anything with it…starting to feel a little braver…..cheers
becteri
WooooooooooooW! That’s all I can say!
MissKristy
Sooooo impressed with the work you and Damian have been doing. It’s absolutely awesome.
Kym Breeze
becteri….woooooow back at you, glad you liked it…
Miss Kristy, oh yes it has been fun getting out of my comfort zone and Damian is a real gentleman, so it’s easy for us to have fun….glad you enjoyed….hopefully more to come…cheers
EmptyHead
“She grew in stature
Immortalised in song”
Chills up my spine when I read that. Nice one.
Kym Breeze
thanks emptyhead, Damian helped me on that line, he is a great writer as well as photographer and a lovely man…cheers…
Jen Whyte
Wow, I am lost for words … totally briliant!
Kym Breeze replied
pijinlane thank you for visiting and glad you enjoyed….cheers Kym