An ODE!!

Cynthia Adams
Author: Cynthia Adams
Word Count: 276
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“I always envied the countries
The scenery,the lifestyle,the weather
From wonderful beaches and panoramic sites
Seems people were happy together.

But somehow my image is changing
The envy is fading quite fast
Content with their lifestyle no longer
Seems greed’s taken over the past.

Each person thinks each is much better
Neighbours vying for material things
One has been swayed by the fur trade
The other has so many gold rings.

Me,I own nothing so priceless
In fact what would I do with such wealth?
You can’t take it with you when Death comes to call
Be grateful you all have your Health!

Just look at the Animal Kingdom,
Now from them we could learn such a lot,
A meal now and then is sufficient,
Material ..they don’t give a jot!

Yet here we are struggling to better ourselves,
Mink,Sable and White Fur’s a must,
“Look what I had to have from the store today”
Speaks volumes if you really have Lust.

Poor Animals is what you should think of,
While your wearing their skins on your back,
Animal Activists will put to an end to this trade
Face it..you could look good in a sack!

You may think Synthetics are Cheap and not cool,
If you do your a Snob, or a Toff,
If I see you outside with a Fur round your arms,
I’m afraid I will rip it straight off.!

Remember think twice before buying
What has died so that you can look fine
Just be grateful you have enough money
For a meal and a bottle of wine.”

FUR IS DEAD.

An ODE!!

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  • hilarydougill

    hilarydougill, 6 months ago

    Great writing, very well written

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies, 6 months ago

    beautiful words, animals have no envy or worry what you believe in, and just see to their own little daily needs well done this is powerful, you should feel proud

  • Crockpot

    Crockpot, 6 months ago

    AWESOME work Cyn!!!!!!!!!
    Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!!!
    Very well said. :D

  • Cindy Lemoi

    Cindy Lemoi, 6 months ago

    Excellent writing, Cynthia !!!

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to Cindy Lemoi’s comment, 6 months ago

    Bless you Cindy..xxxxxxxxx

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to hilarydougill’s comment, 6 months ago

    Bless you Hilary.xx

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to dawndavies’s comment, 6 months ago

    I was chuffed to bits with this one Dawn…lol!!Bless your heart.xx

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to Crockpot’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thankyou Lorie…think it helps bring it home to a few people who sit at home and forget…!!

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies, 6 months ago

    no i am being honest, it was really well written, so you should feel proud, I am glad you wrote this, i dont know about you but sometimes i feel embarrased to call myself human with some of the people on this planet, mainly the ones who run it

  • Joan Smart

    Joan Smart, 6 months ago

    Excellent writing !!!!!!!!

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to dawndavies’s comment, 6 months ago

    Totally agree with that Dawn…The idiots who run this country need to wake up and smell the roses…they live in plush surroundings and get money for employing family…(yeh right)...think I will go into politics…snigger!!

  • Roscoe Davis III

    Roscoe Davis III, 6 months ago

    nice poem

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to Roscoe Davis III’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thankyou Roscoe.xx

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to Joan Smart’s comment, 6 months ago

    Bless you Joan…hope your getting better..wink wink..lol!!

  • Joyce Dickens, IPA

    Joyce Dickens,..., 6 months ago

    Beautifuly written and very powerful; excellent message!

  • apjenkins

    apjenkins, 6 months ago

    wonderful words if only some of them would take note, not just animals they are killing for gain but the people with their greed, its about time the people with all the millions started giving it back instead of taking more!!

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to apjenkins’s comment, 6 months ago

    Fully agree with you AP..take them for loadsamoney…thankyou.xx

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to Joyce Dickens, IPA’s comment, 6 months ago

    Bless you Joyce.xx

  • Andy Harris

    Andy Harris, 6 months ago

    great words Cynthia… powerful stuff!

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL..., 6 months ago

    nice words cynthia

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to Andy Harris’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thankyou Andy…xxxxxxxxx

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to KEITH R. WILLIAMS’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thankyou Keith.x

  • pinkyjain

    pinkyjain, 6 months ago

    This is brilliant Cynthia!!!!!!! Fantastic, beautiful writing

  • Cynthia Adams

    Cynthia Adams in reply to pinkyjain’s comment, 6 months ago

    Thankyou Pinky…your very kind.xx

  • Tony Fallon

    Tony Fallon, 6 months ago

    Yep this is totally unecessary Cynthia. If only people didnt buy it then noone would kill it. Its a sad World of consumption in so many ways. Not up with the fashion scene at the moment. Have they dictated that fur is cool again ?

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies, 6 months ago

    to true, i can remember when i was a kid, if you bought stocks and shares in thing you lived better than most, but now they want instantly to become millionairs, its got a greedy old world

  • Di Edwards

    Di Edwards, 6 months ago

    Here Here! Words to live by, truly. Thank you Cynthia!!

  • Susan Epps Oliver

    Susan Epps Oliver, 6 months ago

    Nice write, Sim…....and I’ve never worn fur on principle. It looks a whole lot better on the animal :)

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