Thoughts of you

kossimarsalsa
Author: kossimarsalsa
Word Count: 69
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Thoughts of you

When you think something of someone and stuff happens that changes it and/or your relationship with them, therefore starting up new problems. I don’t know if many people other than me will get it, but it makes sense to me.

First time I’ve fully written a rhyming poem in ages.

xx
s-a

Thoughts of you belongs to the following groups:

Beginner's Expressions

Rip a hole the size of a pin,
And soon the pain starts flooding in,
Like a stinging paper cut,
A little slice is just enough.

Blood will flow into the room,
Scarlet flowers start to bloom,
Colour draining from my face,
Misery takes up it’s place.

Wishing it was never true,
Banishing those thoughts of you
Waking thoughts and lucid dreams,
Nothing is quite what it seems.

  • Grace Rose

    Grace Rose

    It makes sence

    well written

    xx

  • kossimarsalsa replied

    thanks, i was trying really hard to make it sound like what i was thinking, it means much that it actually does.

    xx
    s-a

  • Grace Rose

    Grace Rose

    Yeah it reminds me of someone i know
    i guess that’s why i kinda love it and hate it

    xx

  • kossimarsalsa replied

    ah i see, fair enough.

    xx
    s-a

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